It isn't that bad, but there's a few things that I personally think could be improved. Firstly the hair, I realize that it's difficult to make it look as 3D-ish as possible, but try. Perhaps adding even more contrast will make it more apparent. Secondly the skin color, now I don't play the FF games and I don't know who Cloud is 100%, but I've seen his appearence numerous times. I personally think that his skin is too pink here, if it were me I'd go for a paler color.

not bad. :/

your skin is poop and you should feel poop