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Level 19 : Journeyman Caveman
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Demonized!

By: GeneralSparkzz



Their were 6 happy kids all on their way to their secret camping spot in the woods they all had a fun time and luaghed and played games but they never came home....
A search party went in to the woods to find them but when they got to the camp site no one was their?

They searched in the area around the camp but never found the... the did find a deep dark cave tho....

They went into the cave and walked farther and farther in.....

one of the rescue team thought they heard a noise behind them but when they turned around..

their was a wall in the cave..


they continued walking see as they cant go back anymore as they walked further in they finally saw a light!

They walked to in and turned to corner to see .....

5 of the kids dead on the ground and the 6th with his back to them not making a noise...

They tried talking to him but he never answered...


Finally they tried to walk over to him ..

When the got to him he reach his hands out with huge claws and killed them almost instantly!

The 3rd man in the rescue team stood and stared as the boy slowly turned around wearing his black hoody and as his skin turned all red... his red glowing eyes staring at the man....

at that moment he said "Lets go camping" and lunged at the man and killed him...

No one went camping in those woods ever again... but 5 years later ... a team of scientist

went back to that cave and found those 5 body's of the kids that never decayed!

They took the body's back to the lab and looked at them for a while.

Then they went and started to cut into them when all the lights all turned off and the room filled with blood curtailing screams! and the sound of flesh being ripped apart!

When the light came on the head scientist was the only one left the rest dead all around him..

he started to walk out of the building every step he took the building collapsed behind him... when he got outside the entire building collapsed........

Their was crowd looking at the man with his head down ... and as he slowly looked up they saw that it was the 6th boy from the group..... he screams then the other 5 kids appeared behind him... then they all vanished..... A note was all that was left on the ground.. a random man from the crowd walked up and read the note ..... "Lets go camping" Written in blood....

He then looked at the crowd to see them all dead on the ground with the 5 kids walking towards him... but something was stopping him from walking back.. so he turned around to see the 6th boy just before he killed the man .....


From this day demonized was never seen again...

the research the man that he killed and turned out..

that he was the man that killed the 6th kids in the cave..

all they wanted was revenge ....


Skin: Demonized.png

Author: GeneralSparkzz


Made on: August/10/2012

Contest: Monster in the closet
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08/12/2012 9:37 am
Level 47 : Master Skinner
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I like the concept of your skin the only thing I would change is I'd probably add something to the hate layer and make the colors a little more varied because its so dark its hard to distinguish body parts
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08/12/2012 11:33 am
Level 19 : Journeyman Caveman
GeneralSparkzz
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Well then you missed the entire part of the story that makes it Dark its not a flashy bright colored character its a demon filled boy with the hatred and rage to the guy that murdered him and stops at nothing to kill him.
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08/12/2012 3:41 pm
Level 47 : Master Skinner
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I get that I'm not saying it should be bright just that it should have a bit more variation shade so ppl can distinguish the parts. Like possibly make the eyes brighter etc. These are just suggestions. You don't have to do that and wasn't trying to offend you in any way.
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08/11/2012 12:43 am
Level 30 : Artisan Engineer
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Great :D
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