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A Carousel Called Life

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No, this is not based on something that happened. Just based on a specific someone. Don't ask.


                                                                                A Carousel Called Life


            I walked up to the benches of the amusement park, looking at all the rides. The sky looked beautiful, as if it was anxious; like me. "Hi." A light voice called out, "Have you seen someoe with a hoodie and a blue watch named Ikago?" My body was unable to move.

         "I'm Ikago." I stood up, my hoodie hiding my face. "I-Ikago, is it really you?" She was shocked when she found out that I was actually Ikago. "Sorry I don't look like the way you though I looked like." I said, getting my hoodie off. "No, it's fine." She smiled. She wasn't annoying like she said she would be like. "Scarlet, can we go on a carousel?" I asked, holding her hand. "Of course we can!"  She smiled and blushed, "Just...hold my hand, I don't want to fall down." I quickly held her in my arms. "I'll never let you go." I cried onto my jacket while still holding her, "I'll never let you go, I promise you!"

         We ran to the carousel, of course there was a line. "You're...so tall." She mumbled, looking up at me. "I'm probably only 3 inches taller." I replied, smiling. So, this is how a date is? I guess every one of them varies. The line shortened, and it was then our turn. The carousel was built beautifully, but like life, it's going to become old and break apart. I held Scarlet's hand when the carousel started, so this emotion called love...

         I have it right? A love where you would be able to talk for hours, or days and would never get bored. A love where if you just hold them in your arms, you feel like you're in heaven. That's why I have. She smiled as she was looking at me. I promised to myself I would cheer her up, yet I'm annoying as hell. I hate myself, why do I always have to ruin my only chance? I'm making it up to her. Meeting here, where I get to have fun with her.

        Where it's just the sky, my emotions, and her. It's a place full of enjoyment, happiness, and despair. You have to have a price for everything. I smiled back, laughing back in enjoyment. "Are you enjoying this?!" I yelled to her, since the music and everyone's laughter was so loud. "Yeah!" She answered, smiling greatly, How come she's having so much fun, with someone like me?

        Do I have magic...or is it because she has the same emotions? I looked at her eyes, sparkling like the starry sky. The carousel ended just like life being beautiful, but then ended. I never knew it but, they had a lot of similairites. "Scarlet, did you have fun?" I asked her, still smiling like an idiot. "That was awesome!" She replied, then went to hug me. I looked at her. Should I kiss her? No...this is a bad time right? Wait, no, I should do it.

       I swiftly moved her hair to her ear, holding her lightly. "I-Ikago.." She whispered, as I kissed her.

       Emotions, they can become actions. I know that now.
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05/18/2015 9:41 pm
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Dannyplayz
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is this high school or college? 


     btw it was amazing! I think you should take the time and write a novel, publish it and, give it to schoolastic. and when is your next one?
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05/20/2015 9:04 pm
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CreeperSoul23
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They are both 20.

Thanks! I don't think it's that's great, and I'm actually really young. Like around the age of 10-13 :o
My next one is going to be...in a few weeks, if not, sooner.
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05/21/2015 7:46 pm
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Dannyplayz
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your'e around my age!?
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05/21/2015 9:49 pm
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CreeperSoul23
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If you're age is around that, then yeah!

Also, since you are interested in my stories, I need a favor. Can you give me an idea for a story? I've been having writer's block for a while...

(P.S If you want me to PM you my age, I can :))
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02/15/2015 3:51 pm
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jman5000555
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Good story, I really liked the analogies and the location descriptions. However it went too fast. I got a bit lost since she just met this guy, yet they are already holding hands. It didn't make a ton of sense in that regard. So maybe if you add some more for clarity or give us a bit of a back story it would make a little more sense. But other than that good story
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02/16/2015 11:07 am
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CreeperSoul23
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Thanks.

oh yeah, apparently this was just a preview of the full story, I didn't feel like putting the full story because I had short time. But thanks for your opinion. :)
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02/16/2015 3:57 pm
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jman5000555
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No problem, keep up the good work
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02/07/2015 7:49 pm
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CottonBones
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thought it was T-T
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02/08/2015 1:23 pm
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CreeperSoul23
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C;
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02/07/2015 5:14 pm
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CottonBones
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ur life sounds like a story  my life is forget homework stay in at lunch pretend im drunk and say stupid things xD
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