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This is an example for this months Flowing Quills Story Contest! See the main post here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/forums/post2409251.html#p2409251
The contest link is here:
http://www.planetminecraft.com/forums/flowing-quills-herobrine-story-contest-t313270.html
Please join the club, and then the contest!

I had had a rough day at school. I got my first detention ever for something I didn't even do! On top of that, I had a TON of homework. I stormed out of the building and started moping home. It wasn't fair! As I passed the post office, I thought I saw someone on the roof. I blinked and looked again, but they were gone. I was quite creeped out by this, but I went home anyway, skulking. I tossed my backpack onto the couch and opened the computer. My background had been changed to a Steve face with white eyes. My stupid brother was trying to screw with me again! Ugh!

Anyway, it was time for some Minecraft! Aww, yeah! I logged into my favorite server, and got to work. All my friends were online! I started greeting them all, but didn't get my normal full screen of warm welcomes... in fact, nobody responded at all... That was weird, they were never all AFK. I decided to go and see if they were in our base. I TPd there, but instead of the warm, torchlit living room I was usually welcomed with, I began to fall. I looked down, and there was nothing below me! I frantically typed /spawn, but even though I spelled it right, it didn't recognize the command! I knew I was doomed, I was nearly to the point in the void where you start taking damage!

I pressed tab to see if I had a bad connection, and saw that nobody was on the server at all! I knew they hadn't left, there wasn't a single log out message. Suddenly, I saw a floating sign. That was impossible! It was falling with me now, turning ever so slowly. As it turned around, I saw what it had to say: "Turn around or the rage forever claims your soul." Really freaking out now, I flipped my mouse around as fast as I could. There was nothing there! Just then, I heard a squeak at my bedroom window. It was then that the truth dawned on me.

Herobrine was real. He wasn't a part of the game, a ghost of the code. He was real! Slowly and apprehensively, I turned around to see him, but I never got there. My body slumped, but my head, it kept going, turning and turning in mid-air. Slowly, I saw myself rising. My body stood up, and my head floated back towards it. I felt it reattach, a strange feeling. The muscles were growing at an incredible speed! And then everything was white.

I couldn't see anything. I felt another conscience pressing against my own, and realized what it was. I was him. He was me. We were one. I slowly felt my sanity dripping through the floor boards until it was gone entirely. The raging hatred was all I knew. All I ever had known. All I ever would know. Occasionally I get memories, certain fleeting moments of the past. But then they're gone, and all I know is the hatred, the rage, and the death. This was the only time I fully regained consciousness, but I know it won't last for long. This is my goodbye to the world. I can somehow feel, I'm never coming back. Not even memories are happening anymore. I see him, he's behind me, and as I finish writing these words, I'm already being pulled back. I don't have long. Goodbye. It was a good run.

Please help me! I just want to stklaldhfapyoreugtih. You're next.

Well, everyone seems to post these, so here's mine. It's quite short, but oh well. I hope you like it! As always,

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08/06/2020 2:35 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Explorer
HeatAspect
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This felt so real! Diamond and like!
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10/25/2013 4:41 pm
Level 74 : Legendary Engineer
Military Minecraft
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diamond!
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10/25/2013 4:43 pm
Level 53 : Grandmaster Creeper Hugger
Jetfrog28
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Thanks!
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10/23/2013 10:50 am
Level 68 : High Grandmaster Senpai
Ludicrous
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Cmon Ludi, its just a story, your too old to run to your parents room... O-O
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10/04/2013 5:15 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Miner
Mabzs
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SCARY LIKE HELL

(Herobrine ate me)
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10/04/2013 12:02 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Blacksmith
Lord Minecraft
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That was creepy.
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10/02/2013 10:17 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Pixel Puncher
k-crafter077
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Epic Story Bro. BUT IS IT TRUE?
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10/03/2013 6:56 pm
Level 53 : Grandmaster Creeper Hugger
Jetfrog28
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That's for me to know, and for you to find out. But I wouldn't take chances...
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10/03/2013 3:18 pm
Level 39 : Artisan Engineer
Strawberrypickle01
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Yeah I wanna know too! Is it really true?? O_o
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10/04/2013 1:43 am
Level 34 : Artisan Birb
VashM16
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No silly
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