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Steve woke up dazed, confused, and with blurry vision. He didno t know where he was, and he didno t know who he was, he was freaking out. What he did know though was that he was in a dark room with bright light shining on his face. It was scorching hot, and he could feel his skins cells burning and falling off. He heard footsteps, o Whoo s there!o He cried, but all he heard was more footsteps. He tried to tug the ropes off, o That wono t work my very nice friend.o A voice said. Steve looked toward the sound of the voice, butall he saw was two white eyes pointing at him. He was scared and he was sweating with fright. Suddenly, he felt a sharp blow to his jaw, and he felt a sharp pain. Steve felt his blood pooling at his shirt. Suddenly, the lights turned on. Steve saw a person, looking almost identical to him, but with two white spots as eyes seemingly to be looking right at him. Steve was starting to see double, and he felt another sharp blow to his throat, and Steve passed out.
Steve woke up in a different room, a hospital room. He was tied to one of the hospital beds, and he saw the the person said. o Time to laugh!o The person said. He forced open Steve's mouth, and he felt some forced air coming through it, it was helium! squirmed and tried to fight but he were too far. He brought a blade, a dagger a silver one with the letters BYE on it. Steve screamed, o No!o But it was too late, and he felt the blood around his chest, it was cold. He was going to die. He passed out.
Steve woke up with a jerk. He felt around, he was in his own bed, it was just a nightmare! He jumped for joy and went down to get some water. Then he heard o Steve, kitchen please.o So he did. He barely got to the kitchen before he felt a sharp blade pierce through his chest. Steve fell to his knees, he barely read the words on the blade before he passed out, it said BYE. Steve died, covered with his own blood, lying on the floor of his kitchen. o It was just a nightmare, how funny.o Herobrine said, laughing on his way out the door.
Steve woke up dazed, confused, and with blurry vision. He didno t know where he was, and he didno t know who he was, he was freaking out. What he did know though was that he was in a dark room with bright light shining on his face. It was scorching hot, and he could feel his skins cells burning and falling off. He heard footsteps, o Whoo s there!o He cried, but all he heard was more footsteps. He tried to tug the ropes off, o That wono t work my very nice friend.o A voice said. Steve looked toward the sound of the voice, butall he saw was two white eyes pointing at him. He was scared and he was sweating with fright. Suddenly, he felt a sharp blow to his jaw, and he felt a sharp pain. Steve felt his blood pooling at his shirt. Suddenly, the lights turned on. Steve saw a person, looking almost identical to him, but with two white spots as eyes seemingly to be looking right at him. Steve was starting to see double, and he felt another sharp blow to his throat, and Steve passed out.
Steve woke up in a different room, a hospital room. He was tied to one of the hospital beds, and he saw the the person said. o Time to laugh!o The person said. He forced open Steve's mouth, and he felt some forced air coming through it, it was helium! squirmed and tried to fight but he were too far. He brought a blade, a dagger a silver one with the letters BYE on it. Steve screamed, o No!o But it was too late, and he felt the blood around his chest, it was cold. He was going to die. He passed out.
Steve woke up with a jerk. He felt around, he was in his own bed, it was just a nightmare! He jumped for joy and went down to get some water. Then he heard o Steve, kitchen please.o So he did. He barely got to the kitchen before he felt a sharp blade pierce through his chest. Steve fell to his knees, he barely read the words on the blade before he passed out, it said BYE. Steve died, covered with his own blood, lying on the floor of his kitchen. o It was just a nightmare, how funny.o Herobrine said, laughing on his way out the door.
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"He was scared and he was sweating with fright. Suddenly, he felt a sharp blow to his jaw, and he felt a sharp pain."
"He didno t know where he was, and he didno t know who he was, he was freaking out."
Probably could exchange that with something else, it sounds kind of weird saying it aloud.
Actually, I had wrote this story for a horror movie, after I made that, I changed the names and some of the words, and BAM! It was changed so it could go on PMC :D
How do you get so many more views n' stuff? I only have like 30 views on my story.