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New save - Minecraft poem

Published Mar 26th, 2013, 3/26/13 6:57 pm
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Darkrai48's Avatar Darkrai48
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Skinner
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"New save"

I start a new save on Minecraft one day,
I open it up, and sit down to play.
The clouds are drifting slowly along,
The game is playing its usual song,

I get up from the ground to look around spawn,
I start at the trees, and soon they're all gone.
With planks in my hand, I build a small hut,
Add on a door, and make sure it's shut.

The sun sinks low as I go inside,
Away from the monsters of the night I will hide.
When the sun rises, I go to explore,
This is a new save, I know I'll adore.


How was that, did you like it? It's just a small thing I made for my creative writing class. I'm really happy with how it came out, so I decided to upload it here for you lovely people.
Enjoy!

~Darkrai48

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08/13/2015 8:08 pm
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Beverly
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That's cute! I love it! :D
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04/14/2013 6:14 am
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flamingZ
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Epic! I know I did not do a music video, but I can't now anyways but still both are EPIC!
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04/14/2013 10:38 am
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Darkrai48
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Lol thanks :P
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03/29/2013 10:08 am
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Psyckotic
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Nice job Dark, didn't know you could write too :)
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03/29/2013 9:00 am
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snowman oath
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Sonnet.
Must have a taken you awhile.
Great job!:D
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03/29/2013 5:56 am
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StormCoreFilms
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Nice one!
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03/29/2013 1:29 am
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Skullduggerycain
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Wow! Great job on this! I'm a bit of a poet myself, and I loved how you made the words flow, put in the effort to make them rhyme, and most of all - have them make sense! Also, you professionally put the poem into stanzas! Good job! *Diamond*
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03/29/2013 11:02 am
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Skinner
Darkrai48
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Thank you! that's really nice!
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03/29/2013 2:32 pm
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Skullduggerycain
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No problem, it's true!
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03/28/2013 11:40 pm
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Killllllller10111
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Epic... I would never think of those rymes
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