this is a (short) story witch i add another chapter every week or may be even more often.

Notch's Kingdom

By Panda_henshall

prologue

the data was alpha version 1, the day was new and the graphic were terrible. The world of minecraftia was owned and created by one man and his name is Notch.

One day of mining and building Notch started to wonder. Notch started to dig to the lowest point of the world but he disobeyed his own law, "DONT dig straight down". Notch didn't fall in to lava or get blow up by a Creeper he fell in to the void after that the world started to evolve; new tree, new Mobs and something strange happened, a Player spawned but they was something inquiring about this 'Player ' thing; number one he is the first Player ever to be spawn, secondly how does he know everything about Notch and finally why is his name Steve?....
TO BE CONTINUED......

also can you tell me how to improve in the comments