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Shanes Guide to Story Writing

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Shanery's Avatar Shanery
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Hello there and welcome to my guide. I hope you enjoy this and find help from it. It took me over 3 days to write the whole thing out, with breaks and such every now and then aswell as school etc. Thanks.

Tips and Points

Grammar

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Punctuation
You use punctuation marks to structure and organise your writing. The most common of these are the period (or full stop in British English), the comma, the exclamation mark, the question mark, the colon and semi-colon, the quote, the apostrophe, the hyphen and dash, and parentheses and brackets. Capital letters are also used to help us organise meaning and to structure the sense of our writing. You NEVER put a comma before "And"

You can quickly see why punctuation is important if you try and read this paragraph which has no punctuation at all:

Steve mined the coal diamonds gold and iron he had left in the mine earlier when his pickaxe broke he jumped down and placed a torch on the wall he was running out of torches and he decided to make another pickaxe from the diamonds he was excited as he placed the 3 diamonds and 2 sticks on the workbench and formed the pick

That went against every instinct in my body. Now, add some punctuation:
Steve mined the coal,diamonds,gold and iron he had left in the mine earlier, when his pickaxe broke. He jumped down and placed a torch on the wall, he was running out of torched and he decided to make another pickaxe from the diamonds. He was excited as he placed the 3 diamonds and 2 sticks on the workbench and formed the pick.

Much better, right?

-Capitalization
Now, im sure you are all shouting at the computer now saying "SHANE, WE KNOW THIS ALREADYZ OMAIGODZ" but alot of people i see are all "steve went to the cinema his friend carl had built out of obsidian and redstone on christmas eve, as a Planet Minecraft project ." So im going to cover it anyway just to be sure, because your going to get raged at if you dont have any grammar. The internet :P

Capitalization is used for a place,person,thing,occasion(NOT Birthdays!), the personal pronoun "I",Abbreviations like PMC and MC.Days of the week,months of the year,countries,languages,religions,titles(King Kevin, Dr.McDonald),trademarks,companies,organizations,monuments(The Eiffel Tower),names of vehicles,names of books,plays,poems,songs,movies and at the start of a sentence. Let me fix your sentence:
"Steve went to the Cinema his friend Carl had built out of obsidian and redstone on Christmas Eve, as a Planet Minecraft project." Much better.

Stages Of Making A Story
-Stage 1 : Prewriting
In this stage, you plan what you are going to write. You choose a topic,identify your audience and purpose,brainstorm ideas, and organize information. Dont give up and go back to your mines, even if this step is boring, it is definitely worth it.
-Stage 2:Drafting
In this stage,you write your ideas in sentences and paragraphs. Follow your prewriting plan to write a first draft of your story. Once again, do not give up or the effort you have put in to stage 1 will go to waste!
-Stage 3:Revising
This stage is the first part of editing your writing. You may work by yourself or with a partner or group. Make changes that will improve your writing.
-Stage 4:Proofreading
In this stage, you finish your editing by polishing your work. Check for errors in grammar,spelling,capitalization and punctuation.Make a final copy of your composition.
-Stage 5:Publishing
Finally, you choose a way to present your work to an audience.You may want to add pictures.Read your work aloud. Whether its a planet minecraft blog or a blog anywhere else, have confidence in your work.

Thank you for reading this, even if it may be a TL;DR. I hope this helped you in some way or other.
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Update #1 : by Shanery 08/31/2012 5:59:55 pmAug 31st, 2012

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03/24/2015 10:37 pm
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Shanery
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After coming back after a few years I expected that my work would be cringy, silly, almost embarrassing to look at but this blog is actually pretty decent :)

Well done past me, you shocked future me.
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08/13/2014 8:17 pm
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever
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yes yes yes, however, the last part about planing- i cannot plan for the life of me 0.0 i-i just write....
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07/13/2013 10:12 pm
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hotguysixpack
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Hey! Shane can you check out my guide here? I put a lot of work into it, (about 2 hours), working on on editing, and making it funny. It only has a good 50 views, but I enjoyed making it? I wrote it a while back, but I think it's still viable. I love your guide, but can you take about 10 minutes of your life to read over this?
A feedback would be nice :D. Sorry to bother you, was just seeing if it meets your standard.
I love your writing, and if it's not too much can you check out this sneak peak of a nice series I'm doing? Right here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/lost-the-series-sneakpeak---9/
I'm submitting it to the PMC Times, and I want to see if people like it first. Thanks for reading this comment! <3
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09/01/2012 11:31 am
Level 36 : Artisan Scribe
Darksoul128
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This is useful Shane and I am pleased you have wrote it for all the writers on here. I may follow some of the tips here when I write although I cannot plan my work as I do not like to and it just means I have to think more, but enough of my writing style. I hope to see more work from you my friend and I am being more active now in writing I hope to see you more often on here.
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09/01/2012 8:46 pm
Level 34 : Artisan Prince
Shanery
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All writers develop their own writing "style" over time. I put mine there for A:People who are getting halfway through a story and suddenly getting struck by writers block. B: People who want a kind of template to base their own style on. C: People who like to plan ahead, like myself.
Nobody has to use it, i just think it might be useful for them ^ :3
Thanks, by the way c:

-Shane /)
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08/31/2012 6:22 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Network
Bethamez
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This will be very helpful to a lot of people :3
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09/01/2012 8:43 pm
Level 34 : Artisan Prince
Shanery
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:3
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07/24/2012 4:49 am
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zachstar1998
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It's good and all, but the blog has to have something to do with minecraft.
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08/31/2012 6:43 pm
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thisisme106
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Umm no it doesnt..
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