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State of Serenity (Contest Entry)

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I jumped out of bed at 6 AM, ate, quickly got dressed and stopped at the mirror.


“This is going to be your day, John. This is the day you’ve been waiting for.” - I said to myself.


I had a job interview at 7 AM at the next town up north. I knew it would be a long and tiresome drive, but I did not care. All I cared about was getting that job. And so, I got into the car and I started driving.



The roads were completely deserted, for all the time I was driving I hadn’t seen a single car on the road.


“You can do this, John. Just believe in yourself, just-”


The car had stopped. The engine had broken down. I looked at my watch. Thirty minutes left, I needed to get there. I started looking for someone to hlep me or drive me. To my right, I found a path. I hurried along the path and arrived in what seemed to be a very old village. Even though it seemed old, it looked quite pleasant. Looking around, I noticed the houses were vacant. In one of the larger houses, I found evidence of people living there, but there was no one there. Suddenly, I noticed it became darker. I stepped outside and looked at the sky. It was nighttime.


“It can’t be nighttime!” - I thought.



Not even a full five minutes ago I was driving in broad daylight, but it wasn’t daylight anymore. I heard footsteps around me. I was no longer in the pleasant village I described earlier, but instead I felt like I was in a horrific nightmare where something evil could just grab me from behind. And then I knew, I knew there was something evil behind me, waiting for me to turn around, so I didn’t, at first. But my curiosity was too great, I just wanted to see…
And I did.




I woke in a room with the odor of decaying corpses. And that was exactly what the room was filled with - decaying corpses. Based on what was left of their clothes it was clear enough that these were the village people.


“Who could have done this? What could have done this?” - I wondered.


After looking carefully through the room, I found nothing but beds and dead bodies. There was not even a door.


“This is not possible! How did I get in if there is no door?” - I thought.


And then, it became worse.


The walls started to move, shoving the corpses towards my bed.


“This must be a dream! It can’t be real!” - I said to myself.


And that’s when it came to me. The sky didn’t turn black, I just fell asleep while driving. All I needed to is relax in the bed and wake up. Relax, and wake up…
But I didn’t.




It was not a dream, it was very real. I never imagined that I would die being crushed by walls in a room surrounded by corpses. I saw a small blade next to one of the corpses. But I didn’t think about saving myself, I didn’t think about survival. For a single moment all I wanted to do was end it, end it all.
And I did.



I woke up once again, this time sitting on a bench outside. It was daytime. The world around me was beautiful, the birds were singing wonderful songs of happiness. I looked in front of me and stared, shocked at what I had seen. This was my funeral. I was dead. I kept telling myself that it was all a dream and that I would wake up.
But I never did.

No jukebox.
Creditcorygolfanatic - inspiration, Jetra for helping me come up with a title
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07/29/2015 1:29 pm
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Beverly
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Wooow- this is pretty good! Gave me shivers *shiver*
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07/24/2015 10:53 am
Level 57 : Grandmaster Cyborg
Pepijn
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10/10 IGN - Needs more jukebox
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07/24/2015 10:55 am
Level 49 : Master Sweetheart
Zatharel
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jukebox pl0x
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07/21/2015 6:28 am
Level 68 : High Grandmaster Senpai
Ludicrous
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no jukebox?

2/10
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07/21/2015 6:53 am
Level 49 : Master Sweetheart
Zatharel
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No jukebox.

please
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07/21/2015 6:59 am
Level 68 : High Grandmaster Senpai
Ludicrous
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</3 good story tho
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07/20/2015 9:26 am
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Mlem Mlem Bat
Insanity
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nice
you probably could've made the car stopping part a little more dramatic but i'm no writer
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07/20/2015 9:33 am
Level 49 : Master Sweetheart
Zatharel
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I heard the crying of the engine. It made me sad, so very sad. My dear car, Steve, had stopped working. It was all lost now, I had lost Steve...
lmao
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07/20/2015 1:46 pm
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Insanity
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pls

the car stopping is the origin of all the events leading to his death, right? it should be more descreptive i guess
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07/21/2015 1:38 am
Level 49 : Master Sweetheart
Zatharel
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I was joking lel
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