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Steve's Life - Part 3

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Alright guys, here it is, we reached Popular Reel, yet again. Part 3 is now here as promised! I am going to be trying my hardest to give you all a good story. Also, I am going to be building the world as the story goes by. The Server I play on has granted me permission to use the Server as a host for my Story. To learn more go to Vanquishercraft.enjin.com so without waiting any longer let it begin!

Steve's Life Part 3

I took a deep breath, and looked back at that purple wall. I readjusted my backpack, as much as I could as it was permanently strapped to my back. I mustered up all my courage and took that last step needed to the inside of the portal. My vision turned purple, my body stopped moving, I tried but my body would not let me move an inch. I started to feel as if my body was being ripped to shred, as if every piece of skin was being ripped off my body! Why couldn't I move? What was happening to me? The scientist acted as if nothing was wrong, why wouldn't he help me?! My vision was completely swirled now, I couldn't see anything straight anymore everything was turning, swirling in my vision. When I could take no more. I blacked out.

It's odd, I remember nothing, the only things I remember, which are limited. My name, is Steve, My world is in grave danger, I have a purpose here. I felt grass at my arms and neck, the only things that weren't covered in my clothing. I felt, different. I didn't know how, but I felt weird. I opened my eyes, I saw a sky, a light blue sky, so beautiful. A cloud floated past, then I noticed something different, the clouds were square, they were all one color, and square.{ imgur.com/GxFxuoB,zjxvHZK} I had no previous memories of clouds, but I knew their name. They looked odd. I sat up, and looked around I saw a tree, a few pumpkins in the distance, and all around me, water. I felt oddly calm, everything I looked at, was one shape, square. I have memories of other shapes, though their names, I can't seem to recall, even their images seem to be fading. I put it out of mind, I decided, since nobody was around shelter was key. I stood up, then noticed the rough material on my shoulders and part of my back. I tried to grab the strap, my hands were square as well. It felt off, but not scary, as if it were meant to be.

I felt a way to grab things. Unfamiliar to me at first, but I perfected it shortly, as if I just put my hand near something and it let me hold it, as it knew what I wanted. But, what is 'it'? I decided to dismiss it. I pulled off the backpack and laid it in my lap, even this simple action seemed wrong, as if it weren't meant to happen. I opened the simple strap and looked inside, hoping for food, maybe something to help me. I noticed nothing inside. As I was closing the bag, I saw a 2x2 square. I felt it, when I touched it, something felt like it should go there. I took a deep breath put the bag back on my shoulders and decided, it's time to make shelter. I stood up and got ready, looked around again {imgur.com/GxFxuoB,zjxvHZK}.

Then I realised, I don't know what to do. Not in the fact of I was wandering around aimlessly. But in the way that, I didn't know how I was going to build. I started to freak out, it started to hit me. I was alone, clueless, no people with me, no idea what to do. I started to cry, I dropped down to my knees and out of frustration I hit the ground. The dirt broke as I punched it. It turned into a smaller block which then popped into my hand. I stopped, I didn't understand, but just as before I put it out of mind. I put my hands on my head, the small block popped out of my hand, and popped into my bag. It was odd.

I took off my bag, sat down again and looked in my bag. The block was neatly at the bottom of my bag. I looked closer at it, it said "Dirt 1". It seemed odd, just like the rest of it, just moved on. I went to the the tree near me. And tried the same technique as before with the dirt block, I punched the wood. It cracked a little bit, I punched it again and again to the point of it breaking. It popped into my hand again. I looked into my hand. The block was quite small, as if about 9 of them could fit in my hand. I reached back towards my bag, the bag sucked the block out of my hand. I sat down again, and took the bag off and placed it in my lap. I looked inside, my dirt, was still there, and my wood was still there. I remembered that 2x2 square. I looked up at it, I noticed an arrow to the right of the 2x2 square and another box. I noticed what it was, a way for me to build things. Simpler and more compact, I realized, I didn't know what it was simpler and more compact than. I put my dirt in one of the squares. Nothing happened. I put my wood in the 2x2 square, and something appeared in my output box. The label said "Plank 4" I grabbed it, put it in my bag and read it's label, "Plank 4". I noticed that I had 4 planks. And I now, knew how to build.

Well there we go guys! Another story wrapped up! I do hope that you enjoyed, and all that fun stuff! Next part, Steve will begin building and all of that. Like I said earlier, the Server I frequent will be allowing me to build Steve's Life there. To see it you can go to vanquishercraft.enjin.com and look at the information about the Server there. Then if you log on, go to /warp stevelife . You should find it then, my name is xTwinBladE on the server, if I'm not on, just ask around, somebody should know me. Thanks for reading again!
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02/13/2013 6:56 pm
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U just got a new subscriber!
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02/13/2013 7:09 pm
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Thanks for the subscribe! And I assure you, I have about 20 stories already planned out in my head. No spoilers :)
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02/13/2013 7:25 pm
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awwww
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02/13/2013 8:01 pm
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Thought of something else, maybe 30-40. Will then look at diamonds, subscribers, etc. If it seems like the people want me to continue I will do so, otherwise. I will move on from writing. That is why I ask for feedback, to know if I should keep going, or change anything, etc.
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02/13/2013 8:22 pm
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Just to start the continuation of the series, KEEP GOING! These are very good, you have very good writing.
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02/13/2013 9:14 pm
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Thank you for your compliments, part 4 has been released, sorry for the late reply, have been writing for the past hour. Let me know what you think!
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02/13/2013 6:56 pm
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MOAR, MOAR, MOAR!!!! That is all.
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02/13/2013 2:24 am
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Epic...Like always!
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02/13/2013 5:52 pm
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Thank you very much, hopefully I will not disappoint in future episodes. I'm trying to become more detailed. Thanks for reading!
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02/12/2013 9:51 pm
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Yay another great story
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02/12/2013 9:57 pm
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Thanks bro!
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