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Then the Wolf cam out with a fright! Alex was scared but then noticed that it was just a sad lonely wolf. They went inside for a walk. Alex put a collar on the dog then by then it was night time. Alex went for a walk in the woods. Creepers, Skeletons, spiders and zombies everywhere Alex wasn't scared until a bunch of wolves came running at him! They jumped all over him biting him with there strong mighty teeth! Alex died! With the wolves howling at the top of their lungs they had food for the night.
When it was morning the dog got up went outside and didn't see Alex he was very sad but 1 year later he found a new owner could Alex. From that day he was still sad.
Thanks for reading! Don't forget to diamond. :) p.s. It's my first story ever. :)
When it was morning the dog got up went outside and didn't see Alex he was very sad but 1 year later he found a new owner could Alex. From that day he was still sad.
Thanks for reading! Don't forget to diamond. :) p.s. It's my first story ever. :)
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Yeah, who is Alex? The model is typically stereotypicallized as female, not male, and saying that he is male makes me wonder who he is. Next time, maybe read up on grammar and spelling. Also, look into a thesaurus, and use one of those to play up your words, make them sound fancier.
Then the Wolf came out with a fright! Alex was scared, but then noticed that it was just a sad lonely wolf. They went off a walk back to Alex's house, where he put a collar on the dog. Alex went for a walk after dusk, in the woods. He meandered about, when creepers, skeletons, spiders and zombies everywhere began to attack him! Alex wasn't scared until a plethera of wolves came running at him! They jumped all over him biting him with there beasteous teeth! Alex died hearing the wolves howling at the top of their lungs they had food for the night.
When it was morning the dog got up went outside, and after not seeing Alex he was rather downtrodden. But, one year later, he found a new owner who was also Alex. From that day he was still sad, and confused.
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