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The Temple-Chapter 1-by zackcostello98

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Level 9 : Apprentice Architect
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Chapter 1

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As I groggily put my equipment into my locker, I couldn't help but notice the others stripping down and heading down the hall towards the office. I trudged down, and took a peak into a misty room. One thing that they didnt include on the brochure- Showers. This time, I decided to just head home. A day at the mine truly tires you out. As I strolled down Oak Street, I noticed that people were inside, but that wasn't unusual, the unusual part was that they were peeking out every so often, and looked afraid. At first, I thought it was all the grime on my face and clothes, but apparently, creepers were hiding out in the shadows.

"Ssssssssss!"

I froze. Every muscle in my body completely shut down. Move! Come on! Come on body, haul tail! Right as I regained senses, I made a beeline for the front door.
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08/14/2012 7:08 pm
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crazeygrl
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Make them longer. A chapter isn't two paragraphs long. :P
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08/14/2012 7:10 pm
Level 9 : Apprentice Architect
zackcostello98
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I'm making the chapters short, and if people want to see me do more, I will make 5-6 paragraph chapters.
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