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Themoons adventures part 3

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Level 9 : Apprentice Ranger
Posted 06/13/12 4:03:48 pm
06/13/12
We ran. We jumped. We tried to fly but we couldn't. That Enderman was unbeatable. We had no weapons. No sources of shelter. No nothing. We could only rely on our wooden swords, which were very close to breaking. We kept running. Breathless and panting, hurried into the nearest cave. The grass blocks crunched under our feet as we stumbled toward the cave.  "Moon I don't think this is a good idea."
     "Me neither." I panted. "While it was day did you manage to get any wood?"
     "I got some. I even got some coal."
     "Perfect. I'll keep watch. You do some crafting."
I took out my sword and walked over to the entrance of the cave. I poked my head in. I seemed to be very empty. I stepped inside. "Moon, we don't have our stuff yet! Don't go in!" I looked back at him.
     "Its OK! Im just checking if there are any..." Thump! I flew backward as a zombie landed on top of me. Its putrid breath clouding my senses. I brandished my sword and whacked it. The zombies head came toppling to the ground.
     "Seve did you see that?" I asked.
     "I'm trying to pretend I didn't." He said hunching over the crafting table.
I snorted and heard a noise. One that sounded like an Enderman." I whirled around to see a cloud of purple haze clouding a man. Tall and deadly. Purple eyes glowing. Prepared to fight.

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Kerrtastic
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June 13, 2012, 2:29 pm

I think it would be a good Idea, when this is all over, to put it all together as one, and revise it, polish it. Then get some cool cover art, that always helps with views!
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Themoonwolves20
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June 13, 2012, 2:30 pm

Cool. Thx for the advice.
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sevebug
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June 13, 2012, 3:04 pm

as a character in this story oh and (this is mostly true) i would suggest making longer
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Themoonwolves20
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June 14, 2012, 12:29 pm

Yes thats true. This is a series of short stories.

PS Why the hell am I banned from your server?

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