Alright. So, I've began a creepypasta series based on a character of mine - Experiment 001. Currently, I've posted two blogs with two different stories. I'm looking for some feedback on my writing skills, as I'm relatively new to short stories and stuff like that. I do plan on updating these stories often. The links can be found below, and I'd really appreciate if you guys left a comment telling me what I could improve. Enjoy c:

1st Installment: http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/creepypasta---experiment-001-beginnings/

2nd Installment: http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/creepypasta---experiment-001-breach/