Hey everyone,

I got some nice feedback when I posted my original lyrics for a song called "End Of The Line" yesterday, so I've decided to share another song which I've wrote. I'm planning to learn the guitar and learn it, so hopefully I can make this one real. Let me know what you think below! Thanks!
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Autumn Breeze

[VERSE 1]
We sat down and watched the shore,
in the quiet autumn breeze.
You turned around and said to me,
"promise you'll never leave".
I said "Yes" as the sky lit up,
with all my hopes and dreams,
but when the sun rose on the horizon,
you were nowhere to be seen.

Another face lost in the crowd,
another chance is stolen,
the autumn breeze turns sharp as ice,
and the shore I watch turns frozen.
The sun drowns and the sky lights up,
with all my hopes and dreams.
And still I wish I'd hear your song,
as you come back to me.

[PRE-CHORUS]

Why should I be afraid? I've got nothing to fear losing.
My brain says to move on, but my heartstrings are refusing.
And as I stand on the cliffs, looking deep in the abyss,
The songs that you would sing to me are the only things I miss.

[CHORUS]
Yeah I'm in limbo, hanging, I'm way over my head,
And as I look around me, at nothing, I remember what you said,
that you walk with me, singing, through skies of midnight blue,
So I guess I'll sit here, 'till Autumn, so I can sing with you.
So I can sing with you...

[VERSE 2]
Spring hits me like a rain of knives,
as the rain pours down my coat.
The songs keep me company,
as the thunder hits my throat.
The rain dries and the skies clear,
in the valley of my fragile heart.
So you can come along again,
to shatter it like a pane of glass.

[PRE-CHORUS]

Why should I be afraid? I've got nothing to fear losing.
My brain says to move on, but my heartstrings are refusing.
And as I stand on the cliffs, looking deep in the abyss,
The songs that you would sing to me are the only things I miss.

[CHORUS]
Yeah I'm in limbo, hanging, I'm way over my head,
And as I look around me, at nothing, I remember what you said,
that you walk with me, singing, through skies of midnight blue,
So I guess I'll sit here, 'till Autumn, so I can sing with you.
So I can sing with you...

[BRIDGE]
Summer burns like a scorching flame,
the embers whisper out your name,
I think I can hear the melody,
as the leaves begin to change.
The moon glows like a disco ball,
as the storm builds up a cloudy wall,
and I wonder if you will be the same...

[OUT]
I see you walk across the sand to me,
as we talk we're bursting from the seems,
the sky lights up all my hopes and dreams,
You lead me by the hand as we turn to leave...

In the autumn breeze.