For an adventure map that's supposed to be driven by it's story, it's story wasn't that compelling. It was very generic, and the character's actions were very illogical from what I was given. And while it was common to spell words phonetically back in this time period, the amount of errors in the writing wasn't consistent enough to seem like it. And yes, I understand you're likely very young. But I can either give you praise for a terrible map, or give you some goals to work on in your future maps. I think you can imagine which is more helpful.