first story that i tried that failed x3

Edith is the queen of all the eagles that soar threw the sky, way up above the clouds. she has a dress made from eagle feathers. you may notice the gold thing on her head, well, that is her crown, givin to her from the eagles, it is know as the "sky amulet" it was givin to her because she has always been nice to all the eagles for her hole life, so, all the eagles disided to give it to her so she shall be there queen.

Story

Edith once was an average girl, well, not completly average, she had powers, her powers were that she could fly, she always loved to fly. all her class mates made fun of her because she wasn't average. They didn't make fun of her just because she could fly, they made fun of her because she looked differnt compared to other people, she has yellow eyes (colour of eagle eyes). so, one day they went to far, Edit was so sad. she ran away to a lake and sat there, crying. she said to her self "i wish i could be normal, then no one would be mean to me" a few minutes after she saw a huge griffin come to her, as she saw that she fainted. the griffin picked her up and took her up far from the world she calls home, way past the clouds. when Edith wook up she was in a whole differnt world, a cloud world i guess. there were griffins and eagles every were. that was when the eagles crowned her their queen. so now, and forever Edith shall be the queen, of all eagles in the world. 

well, thats my story hope you guys liked it :P sorry if their are any typos or anything :P i'm not the best speller ever.
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