Hey guys, a few months ago i was playing an adventure map called Pit Parkour and i never got to do a review on it because of an uploading issue with PMC so i had to go and repair the problem on my end because i was able to upload from an internet cafe pc but not my own internet so heres the review
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Pit Parkour Review

This is practically one of your basic parkour maps (well rather simplistic when you think about it) which you have to jump from block to block. It consists of randomly placed blacks and items suck as stone, tnt, ice, lapis lazuli and budder and is actually really challenging. Dont take my word for granted guys and be thinking "Oh its just Naku he doesn't play Minecraft much due to his sucky pc so i can do this in 1 go" NO dont think that because although i was doing it with lag i actually had to plot my jumps and when i had to jump and think i died 68+1 times and is literally impossible because i fell down so much that i literally began to shed a tear out of complete frustration but what's really disappointing is that i didn't get to the budder level


Critiques & Improvements:

1. Design: Although the gameplay was good i find that the scenery or design for the map to be very poor. It rather much looks like if you just used some McEdit filters to do this instead of actually getting into the layout of the level and shows a bit of laziness which isn't appealing if you hope to get a lot of downloads. Now what you could of done was find a nice biome and use some tnt to bore a whole that makes it look more naturally formed but make sure that you fill up some large caves and chasms you may find while tunneling underneath and the scenery will look absolutely beautiful

2. Storyline: Story lines help progress the story along and build an interest in the reader/viewer and will make them want to download it and want to subscribe to you to see more so thats a really vital aspect

3. Gamemode: The first thing i noticed when i spawned was that you were in creative mode and the player had full access to cheats which means they could of flied up and out of the chasm so its really a downer and they can also set where they spawn so next time you make an adventure map make sure to set the gamemode to survival or adventure mode and disable cheats before exiting because we dont want anyone cheating there way do we?

Suggestions:

1. Traps: Well you should enable traps through the parkour map to give more of a difficulty to the player

Evaluation:

Well in overall all i gotta say is that the map was very good in gameplay however i know you can do better, for it seems like it was a bit lazily done so yeah im hoping to see a better improvement in scenery and hopefully you will learn from your mistakes.

Anyway guys that all i gotta say if you want to check out the map click the link below
LINK: [url=CLICKY%20ME]www.planetminecraft.com/project/pit-parkour----ultimate-parkour/[/url]
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