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How to save a life - Cave Hanger Contest

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Warrior Ahunter83's Avatar Warrior Ahunter83
Level 22 : Expert Fisherman
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[size=10pt]         Steve sighed in exhaustion. He had been down in a mine for a couple days now. He was trying to mine a gold ore block when he heard a familiar sound. He turned around to find a spider and a zombie a block away from him. Steve swung his iron pickaxe and knocked the monsters back one block. Suddenly, his iron pickaxe shattered into small iron pieces and wooden splitters. [i]Oh great[/i], he thought,[i] I must go grab my sword[/i]. Steve ran past the monsters, which were trying to regroup after the attack, and headed towards the ladder ... that wasn’t there.[/size][size=10pt] The monsters turned to face Steve and started to creep up towards him.
         He slowly backed up, one block at a time. In no time at all, he was one block away from a pool of lava. [i]So this is how I end?[/i] Steve asked himself. He sighed, accepting his fate when an arrow whipped by and hit the spider right in the back of its head. The spider flew into the pool of lava and burned to a crisp. The zombie glance followed the spider as it hit the lava. Another arrow zipped by, hitting the zombie and sending him into the lava too. [/size]
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     “Your welcome.” A figure said, holding a bow. The figure had blond hair that when to her chest. Her green shirt had been burned and torn and her brown pants were too much better. “The name’s Alex.” [/size]
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       “Isn’t that a boy’s name?”




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Update #1 - The Grammar Bug : by Warrior Ahunter83 09/27/2015 11:40:30 pmSep 27th, 2015

Just worked with some grammer bugs and made it easier to read. Thanks for all of the support for my little tale. With all the support behinded me, I may be able to make it to the final 100.

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10/01/2015 10:53 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
NotAHacker3
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Wow nice job!
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10/01/2015 4:53 pm
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Senpai
GrayRemnant
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Good job!
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09/26/2015 3:44 pm
Level 27 : Expert Skinner
UnchartedPlanet
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Really good story! Hope you get through!
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09/25/2015 8:57 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Sweetheart
Catligraphy
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xD @MatchKittyPro is right but I like the story
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09/25/2015 9:39 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Network
UNDERTALE_CREW
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xD That's not a good way to talk to her. She's gonna be mad! Nice ending
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09/25/2015 10:34 pm
Level 22 : Expert Fisherman
Warrior Ahunter83
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Originally I wanted Alex to either punch Steve into the lava or shoot an arrow at him. I, however, ran out of words.
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09/26/2015 10:17 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Network
UNDERTALE_CREW
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Aww, IKR?! I barely had enough room to do my own story and  had to cut a lot of description.
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