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I'm Sorry - Story [POPREEL!]

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Just want to say, this is based on a true story. Thanks for dropping by :)


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                                                                        I'm Sorry


My palms sweated from the P.E. excersice. "Hey, you okay?" My friend, Mark asked. "I'm okay.." I replied, breathing hardly and beginning to feel light-headed. "It wasn't even that hard, get used to it." He said, and smiled lightly. He slapped my back and started to laugh. I fell on the grass and felt dizzy.

"Dude?"
   "Woah, Ikago!"
"What happened?"

The words echoed in my head, my vision went black.



I opened my eyes and I was at a bench in the school. "What happened, Ikago?" Cynthia said in a light voice. I couldn't move, my eyes were blurry...I felt like it wasn't the excersice that did this. But it was because of my stress. I rolled down, but forgot I was on the bench.

And my head started to bleed.
I took my hand to get a bit of the blood, since I was telling myself, "It's not blood."

There it was.
Mark came and then started to ask if I was okay.
"I'm fine." I said.
I was fine, right? I collapsed once more. Being tired of life. I couldn't believe myself. It wasn't the excersice, I know it wasn't...

Was it...because...I wanted to die?
I'm useless anyway...
I'm a piece of garbage no one likes.
I stood up, legs trembling, I closed my eyes, and then asked the teacher, "Can I....stop for P.E.?"

"Yeah, that'll be fine."

I sat on the bench. My friends around me.
"You guys all hate me, don't you?" I asked.
There was a silence going around.
"IF I DIED YOU WOULDN'T CARE, RIGHT?"
I cried the first tear.

"Right...?"

Mark spoke, "I'm sorry...What happened to you?"


The blood went onto my hand.
I don't deserve to live anymore.
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01/18/2015 9:09 pm
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Mail Order Cowboy
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Might I ask why you bother posting a screenshot of your blog on the pop-reel? Also, why do you write "[POPREEL]" in the title? It's a bit distracting, and it makes it seem like a good reaction from the community surprised you. In that case, you probably don't think your work is very good.
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01/18/2015 9:14 pm
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CreeperSoul23
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What's wrong with putting popreel?
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01/18/2015 9:22 pm
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Mail Order Cowboy
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Please re-read my comment as I've already adressed that.
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01/18/2015 9:23 pm
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CreeperSoul23
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No I mean how is it distracting?
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01/18/2015 9:30 pm
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Mail Order Cowboy
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When you mean something, it's often good to write what you mean and not something unrelated.

It's distracting because it's in full caps. Also, how is a giant picture at the start of your blog not distracting? I had to scroll down to see anything else.
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01/18/2015 10:32 pm
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Mail Order Cowboy
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I'd also like you to know that I don't mean to offend, I just want to help you improve your content so that the site will be nicer for everyone. My apologies if you took my comments as an attack.
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01/18/2015 6:00 pm
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Continental_General
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I showed this to my counselor and he suggested long-term mental therapy.
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01/18/2015 6:11 pm
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CreeperSoul23
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I'm fine though since this happened a long time ago.
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01/19/2015 2:06 pm
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Continental_General
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Nice to see that you are in good mental condition, then!
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01/18/2015 10:48 am
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Phasecode
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sad but i leik :D
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01/18/2015 6:10 pm
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CreeperSoul23
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:3
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