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The Kinder Child

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(i apoligize if this story is off topic in a few places, or not good. It's my first one.)




Chapter one, Just The Beggining.
"Hey, get over here!" Yelled Hannah, Cindy's big sister. "Nope!" Cindy said while giggling, still running away from Hannah.
Their Mother and Father were away running errands, while the oldest child was at college. Cindy's only in kindergarden, while Hannah is in highschool. Hannah has lost Cindy, and then heard a crash and crying. "CINDY?? ARE YOU OK??" All she got as an answer was silence... Even the birds outside were silent.
Chapter two, The Doctor
Hannah dashed around the house, and found Cindy laying on the ground unconcious with a lamp ontop of her. She dug through her pockets. "NO!" She forgot that Mother and Father took her phone to help her keep an eye on Cindy. She dashed out of the house to her neighbor, which just so happened to be a doctor. She knocked on the door, and watched as the young doctor-man opened the door. "Please help me, my little sister, she's-" Hannah tried to finish when the doctor shushed her. "Shush young child, bring me to your sister." The doctor seemed serious as he glared at Hannah.
Chapter three, Unknown Magicks
Hannah took the doctor to Cindy, who was still laying there. The doctor, who was named Brian by the way, kneeled down to Cindy. He put his hand on her rist and talked in a soothing voice. "She is very much alive, she just needs time." Hannah sighed in relief. "However, she is very much injured. Although, rest will heal her, it may take a while and there may be some side effects." Brian lowered Hannah's self-confidience, and she sighed. "Could you tell me one of them?" Hannah's voice and eyes were filled with sorrow. "The side effects are unknown, but if you are lucky they will not be permama-" Brian stopped in his tracks. Cindy's body was glowing a light/pastel pink, and the iris of both her eyes turned that color. Both Brian and Hannah got knocked back onto the wall, as Cindy's body was floating up. Brian was speechless, and so was Hannah. 'How could Mother and Father not tell me this???' Hannah thought. Cindy's body was now on the ground, her hair and eyes light pink.
Chapter four, The awakening
5 weeks have passed, and Hannah was miserable. She got news that the day of Cindy's "Transformation" her parents died in a car crash, and she had to drop out of highschool to take care of Cindy. Cindy has shown no sign of waking up, and she was on her bed, in the same state. Hannah was watching her 24/7, and Brian now lived with them to help. He brought up food and water for Hannah, but she sometimes tried to put some of the water or food in Cindy's mouth. Then, Brian walked in with more food and water. "Here, you'll need it.." He said while giving it to Hannah. She tried putting it in Cindy's mouth again, but Brian stopped her. "It's no use, have it for yourself, you need it more then her." Brian tried to make Hannah feel better, but it didn't work. "What if she's dead all because of me?!?" Hannah has been like this the whole time, but she heard a voice. A familiar voice. "But.. i'm not.. i think..." Hannah jerked her head away from Brian, and looked at Cindy, she was glowing again. Hannah watched as Cindy opened her eyes as slow as a snail pulling a turtle which was carrying 10 rocks. "CINDY!!!" Hannah screeched when she noticed Cindy was alive. She hugged her super tight, and Brian sighed. "I guess it's time for me to take my leave." Brian said, while walking out of the room. Hannah looked at Cindy's face. Cindy could tell she was estatic. "One question.." Cindy said while looking up at Hannah.
Chapter five, Devestaition
"Anything, Cindy." Hannah said while wiping away her tears. "Who's Cindy?" Cindy asked, confused. Hannah was shocked. 'First my parents are gone and now Cindy!' Hannah started doubting herself completely, but she now had a new phone. She called Brian and he came instantly. He put his hand on Cindy's shoulder. 'I need you to lay down, ok?" Cindy laid down confused, and Brian started asking questions. "What is your name" Brian asked. "Cind- no.. Kai- no.. Kin.. Kinde.. Kinder!" Cindy Kinder replied. Brian sighed. "Classic case of lost-memory. Give her some time." Brian sounded like he knew what he was doing, so Hannah obeyed him and left, crying.
Chapter five, i have no name for this chapter q-p
Kinder was in her bed confused. 'Who was she?" she thought to herself. She heard loud sobbing from downstairs, and slowly got up, walking to the door of her pink room. She opened the door, only to see a kitten and a puppy. They were sitting in front of her door, like they were guarding her, or keeping her inside. She looked out her window and thought. 'i wanna go downstairs...' When she thought that, to her surprise, she was teleported downstairs. Hannah looked at her like she just killed a thousand full grown male great white sharks with one poke. Brian looked the same. "What?" Kinder walked into the kitchen like teleporting is a normal thing nowadays. She got some strawberry milk and then some chocolate covered strawberries, eating and drinking them like nothing happened.
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Please continuuuuee.. ;u; <33
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Boom. Another chapter.
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such a sad story ;-; but with good descriptions :P Good job :D
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01/19/2016 4:27 pm
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Thanks! If i get more comments like this i might continue it =P
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yahoo :D
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01/20/2016 9:58 am
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Boom. Another chapter.
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:P yaasss
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idk why i even made a story about a rip-off of Herobrine XD
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