82
The Last Swing
By:LTD/MamaSlime
Chapter I
“Honey we got to go to school! Get your butt down here!” Bella’s step-mom said. “I’m playing minecraft mom! I hate school! I wish I could just live in minecraft! Why does life have to be so crappy!” Bella said. “No one cares about minecraft now grow up and get down here missy!” “FINE.” Bella shut her laptop with full force, ran downstairs grabbed her backpack and left on the bus. Like usual, no one sat with her because everyone thought she was a geek. Bella hated high-school no one accepted her for who she was. Only the other minecraft players did.
The bus squeaked as they slid into the schools bus stop. Bella got off the bus and headed to her locker. She saw people smirking when she walked by and felt scared at what rumors have been going around about her today. Bella opened her locker and heard someone saying her name behind her. She didn’t want to turn back and knew she would regret it but she did anyways. It was her math teacher, the only teacher she actually liked. “Bella we need to talk honey, when you’re done here come to my room.” “Alright Miss Tresa, I’ll be there in a bit.” Miss Tresa walked away to her classroom.
Bella finished putting the things she needed to away in her locker. She walked to Miss Tresa’s room. Bella knocked softly on the old torn up door. “Come in!” Miss Tresa said loudly. Bella opened the door and walked in. It smelled like moldy cheese and rotten meat. Bella made a weird face and sat down in one of the seats. “Hi Bella” Said Miss Tresa. “Hi, what did you need from me Miss Tresa? Do I have a very bad grade or something?” Bella said quietly. Bella never really was a loud person. She always was quiet and never talked to anyone except her friends. “No, I wanted to talk to you about minecraft.” Bellas heart stopped. How did she know? What’s going on? Why does she want to talk to me about this? Bella was silent. “I’m guessing you want to know how I found out?” Bella shook her head giving the ‘yes’ symbol. “Well, let me start out. I play minecraft and adore it also. I saw people making fun of you because you have minecraft tee-shirts you put on a lot. I just want to say, If you love Minecraft then do it. You’re doing something you love and there’s nothing that should stop you.” Bella smiled. She has not have had anyone say that to her before she felt good inside. “Thanks.” Bella said softly. “Now get to your classroom before you become last miss!” Bella picked up her books and stepped towards the door with the squeaking floors. She turned around, “I wish I lived in Minecraft.” Bella said groany. “Don’t we all.” Miss Tresa said with joy. Bella put her hand on the door knob. She opened the door and the entire room shook. “Earthquake!” Bella said scared as a bride on a wedding day. No, it was no earthquake. Bella and Tresa fell through this portal that randomly sprang in the classroom floor.
Bella was flying in the air and landed in a lake of water. Grumly, she headed twords the beach. She got onto the sand and sprawled across it and laid down. Then, she saw this person falling from the same direction she was. This person landed on her. “Ohhph” Bella exclaimed. It was Miss Tresa. She looked different though. In… pixely form? Bella looked around. This was no normal world. All blocky. She knew where she was…. Minecraft. “Oh Sh&t” Bella said to herself.” She laid her head back down and saw nothing but blackness.
To be continued….
By:LTD/MamaSlime
Chapter I
“Honey we got to go to school! Get your butt down here!” Bella’s step-mom said. “I’m playing minecraft mom! I hate school! I wish I could just live in minecraft! Why does life have to be so crappy!” Bella said. “No one cares about minecraft now grow up and get down here missy!” “FINE.” Bella shut her laptop with full force, ran downstairs grabbed her backpack and left on the bus. Like usual, no one sat with her because everyone thought she was a geek. Bella hated high-school no one accepted her for who she was. Only the other minecraft players did.
The bus squeaked as they slid into the schools bus stop. Bella got off the bus and headed to her locker. She saw people smirking when she walked by and felt scared at what rumors have been going around about her today. Bella opened her locker and heard someone saying her name behind her. She didn’t want to turn back and knew she would regret it but she did anyways. It was her math teacher, the only teacher she actually liked. “Bella we need to talk honey, when you’re done here come to my room.” “Alright Miss Tresa, I’ll be there in a bit.” Miss Tresa walked away to her classroom.
Bella finished putting the things she needed to away in her locker. She walked to Miss Tresa’s room. Bella knocked softly on the old torn up door. “Come in!” Miss Tresa said loudly. Bella opened the door and walked in. It smelled like moldy cheese and rotten meat. Bella made a weird face and sat down in one of the seats. “Hi Bella” Said Miss Tresa. “Hi, what did you need from me Miss Tresa? Do I have a very bad grade or something?” Bella said quietly. Bella never really was a loud person. She always was quiet and never talked to anyone except her friends. “No, I wanted to talk to you about minecraft.” Bellas heart stopped. How did she know? What’s going on? Why does she want to talk to me about this? Bella was silent. “I’m guessing you want to know how I found out?” Bella shook her head giving the ‘yes’ symbol. “Well, let me start out. I play minecraft and adore it also. I saw people making fun of you because you have minecraft tee-shirts you put on a lot. I just want to say, If you love Minecraft then do it. You’re doing something you love and there’s nothing that should stop you.” Bella smiled. She has not have had anyone say that to her before she felt good inside. “Thanks.” Bella said softly. “Now get to your classroom before you become last miss!” Bella picked up her books and stepped towards the door with the squeaking floors. She turned around, “I wish I lived in Minecraft.” Bella said groany. “Don’t we all.” Miss Tresa said with joy. Bella put her hand on the door knob. She opened the door and the entire room shook. “Earthquake!” Bella said scared as a bride on a wedding day. No, it was no earthquake. Bella and Tresa fell through this portal that randomly sprang in the classroom floor.
Bella was flying in the air and landed in a lake of water. Grumly, she headed twords the beach. She got onto the sand and sprawled across it and laid down. Then, she saw this person falling from the same direction she was. This person landed on her. “Ohhph” Bella exclaimed. It was Miss Tresa. She looked different though. In… pixely form? Bella looked around. This was no normal world. All blocky. She knew where she was…. Minecraft. “Oh Sh&t” Bella said to herself.” She laid her head back down and saw nothing but blackness.
To be continued….
| Credit | My English Teacher.. Lol |
| Tags |
tools/tracking
2632682
6
the-last-swing-chapter-1-miss-tresa
star_weaver
WishesToTheStars
wildmaster84
McOnlySkins
YSADI
BLACKMAGE_NEW_GHOSTE
GalaxyCat24
The Last Kirbalorian
PaintsplattersMC
seventeenpointfour
MarecekD033
Create an account or sign in to comment.
But I know that just saying it's good isn't enough. You want REAL feed back. Proof read your work a BUNCH of times if you want to catch all mistakes. I had to stop a couple times because it didn't make sense such as "Grumly, she headed twords the beach. " or "Bella finished putting the things she needed to away in her locker" . Why would you put the things you need in your locker? Concept is great, and my last tip is grammar. You missed a bunch of punctuation marks, and it makes it a bit confusing to read. Again, re-reading your work will greatly aid you.