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I can't get much from one page, but it looks fine, though some people don't like sprite comics (I don't mind them as long as they are well written). The word balloons look a bit weird, I think pixel art styled ones would probably be better for your comic, and, unless each character has their own text color, the red text seems a little out of place, since most comics just use black for text. You should also try hosting it on a webcomic host (ComicFury, Comic Genesis, Comic Dish) so people can read it in order, imgur is terrible for long form comics. You might want to make it a little smaller as well, it's wider than my screen.