You put the gender for Male when it's a Female. I'm going to give you constructive criticism while being seemingly harmless, it's just to help you.

I give it a 0.5/10

1. It has unoriginal sparkly eyes.It's the worst part about this skin. It makes girl skins look rather hideous than cute in my opinion. It's so disturbing, it would make a good Halloween costume. It's hideous and unoriginal at the same time. Most people pick one side, and I'm still disturbed by that, but if you choose both it's just horrible.
2. It uses a typical bra-strap outfit. You don't need to be revealing on Minecraft even though there are some dinguses that fall in love with a pixelated model.
3. It has no detail. It's just solid except for the eyes. Some people do make the eyes solid, but they're both equally inept to me.
4. It looks almost like every girl skin you see.

I gave it a 0.5 because you added additional hair rather than just completely reskinning.

Remember, it's not to hurt you. Just try to be more original.