Once there was a time, a time when all was nice in the world the villigers the creeps and wirdos. untill one day all was changed.
Two babys were born one called Steve and the other Herobrine, they were completley identical, eyes, nose, mouth. Now these
two got on just fine, they lern't to speak, read, write, craft, cook, and may other things quite quickly. And very soon they
relized that they where...diffrent. They where more strong they could run fast and where very clever, at the age of five
they could wrestle a grown man to the ground with one hand. Untill one day, Herobrine and Steve were playing a game
in the Baker's shop named Ye' old cooker, they where pushing each other and play fighting, now they came up to a cellar
door, Steve had'nt relized and pushed Herobrine quite hard, Herobrine fell a hit his head. Steve rushed down,but Herobrine
wasen't moving, Steve called for help, untill Ye' old cooker's owner came, she shoved a great big golden apple in his mouth, soon
Herobrine sat up, and spat out the apple. "Ar' you ok there me dear" Ye' old cooker's owner would say to him oftern. But
Herobrine never spoke nor botherd with anything, he only did his own thing from then on. No one in the village spoke to him
only Steve did, but Herobrine never awnserd. Herobrine just stayed in his room doing something, no one new what, until chatter
broke out about Herobrine doing something with...magic. From then on the people of the village shiverd at the sound of
Herobrine's name. A dark night came when everyone was asleep,Steve woke to the noise of shuffling, then he heard the door
slam. He got out of his woll bed and followed the sound, soon he was in the dark woods and heard strange noises comming from
a mucky pond not far off, when he got to the pond he saw Herobrine leaning over the pond,with fuzzy picture in purple smoke
around him. "Herobrine what are you doing" Steve asked him, but he didn't awnser. Suddenly they heard screaming comming
from the village, Herobrine stoped the smoke and ran towards the village,Steve followed. In the village there were zombies
lots of them and skeletons and spiders, Steve saw skeletons sitting on spiders, now he didn't get that but he new they where
evil. Steve ran indoors and picked up his bow, then he ran out side with his quiver and arrows, everyone was up now with swords
and weapons, armour and things. The zombies were setting fire to buildings, then Steve saw his mother and father fighting for
there life he ran to help but he was to late. Steve sobbed as he shot the zombies and skeletons. Then there was Herobrine
fire licked at him and bit him, he didn't seem to mind, but his eyes they were white! Not blue white only one though.
It was crazy steve ran to
his rescue when two zombies pushed him back, they wraped the skinny hands around Herobrines arms and took him off into
the east side of the village, the desert side. they ran with him further off into the desert, Steve only jogged since had cut his
knee on a tip of a arrow. The zombies came to a stop and a portal appeard in front of them, it was purple quite clear. Steve
forgot he was carrying the bow, untill he droped a arrow as he picked it up he took his bow to shoot the zombies, but Herobrine
used magic to make him drop it. They stood in the portal, Herobrine faced him and actually grined, "goodbye..." Herobrine said as his other eye went...white
then they dissapered, just gone. Steve ran back to the village but no one...no no one there...dead he supposed or captured
most likley dead. And the monsters were gone, he was alone. He ran into his house and grabed his last supplies. He was only 18 now
but still alone.... THE END Give me some ideas i should add please and diamond