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Rp/Story Blog: Part One of "The Story of the Mysterious Girl" -💀♏օ♏օ💀 | FIRST EVER POPREEL! In only 17 hours xD

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Ok well guys, I decided to start doing this since I am VERY passionate about writing and I'd love to share my work with you all!
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"The Young Girl"

The Fires were blazing throughout the town. Families cowwering in their homes, others outside fighting for their lives. Screams of agony couldbe heard all through the area. The Planet's days were ending for its existance. The Army was so desperate for help that they have been recruiting children of the age of 10 and above. Jackie was a young girl at this time, age of 8 years old. She was sitting inside her home with her mother Elenor and her baby brother Felix(Age of 2). They watched as Jackie's father, Gabriel (most commonly known as Tonis) ,fought their enemies, the Daleks. Alongside him was her mother and father's childhood friend, The Doctor. Felx was laying in his crib fast asleep. Her mother drew in a shaky breath and finally spoke to Jackie "I want you to be brave no matter what happens, ok?". Jackie nodded, not sure of what her other was asking her or what she meant. Her mother smiled as a tear trickled down her face. She picked Jackie up and walked outside. Elenor stuck to the shadows as she tried to avoid the shots of the Daleks. She walked over to Tonis and whispered what sounded like "Its Time" In his ear. Tonis nodded and followed her to a dark alleyway, Jackie looking a bit frightened of what was happening at this momment. In a small corner in the alleyway was a small capsule, the size of a log. Elenor laid Jackie inside and gave her a bag as she cried to her daughter "Be safe my love! We will miss you!". Jackie looked confused at them as they then pushed a button on the capsule and she started to launch off. She was only 1/2 way into the air when she heard a bang in the alleyways and a large shadow peeped around the corner. Jackie looked on as the shadow made its move and launched itslelf at her unaware parents. Elenor and Tonis was no more, what remained of the 2 was only nothing... just 2 lifeless limo bodies with faces of terror and confusion. Jackie yelped and she randomly punched a button and she launched off a little more faster, but as she did... she found her self slowly falling to sleep.
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11/25/2015 11:50 am
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Elequantly written, might I say, and also....    I LOVE DOCTOR WHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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11/26/2015 2:22 pm
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Prxfesor
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Thank You so much and I totally Agree :D Doctor Who is BRILLIANT!
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09/24/2015 12:44 pm
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Beverly
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It's wonderful, keep writing please! ♥
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09/24/2015 5:15 pm
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Prxfesor
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Awww thx! Part 2 will be out soon! I will mostly be posting all the stories me and my friends are writing in my writing notebook that I keep my stories in! So be looking out for them :D
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09/24/2015 11:42 am
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KittyRosie
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This was really good and got my interest quickly :) Really nice job I hope you keep writing stories! ~<3
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09/24/2015 5:16 pm
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Prxfesor
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I definantly will be for the rest of my life! I will mostly likely be part writer when I get older. Also thank you, I try my best to get them hooked xD!
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