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WAZAPPPP PPLZ i am a random guy uve never heard of and dis is my new blog so let me explain whut this shiz is about ok every week i will go to a random server and interview a random player and a random owner ranomly ok this weeks server isssssss drum role please [Ender craft] i decided to start off with this serv cause ive been going on for a while nobody remembers me there :[ but its still a fun server as i type they are building a sort of parkor
well then lets here a few words from the owner: cooljack19 he says this about his server:"a fun pvp server for players who love pvp and survival .
cool jacks reason for you to join this server is: players should join because it is a fun server with proffesional staff and coded to provide the best in-game experience.
i also interviewed a player called fallenchaz he says: an awesome server which you will never want to leave
well thats all folks till next wednesday comment me with a server for me to interview and i will pick up to 3 candidates.
Ender craft: 176.31.138.232
well then lets here a few words from the owner: cooljack19 he says this about his server:"a fun pvp server for players who love pvp and survival .
cool jacks reason for you to join this server is: players should join because it is a fun server with proffesional staff and coded to provide the best in-game experience.
i also interviewed a player called fallenchaz he says: an awesome server which you will never want to leave
well thats all folks till next wednesday comment me with a server for me to interview and i will pick up to 3 candidates.
Ender craft: 176.31.138.232
| Credit | cooljack19, fallenchaz |
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You might want to make your title cleaner and easier to read by shortening it and capitalizing things that need to be. I would probably rewrite the title as "EnderCraft: A Server Review".
Paragraphs are your friend. Please do not lump almost all the text into one block. It makes it very hard to read. As an author myself, it also bugs me when people attempt to write blogs but make no attempt to use punctuation or correct capitalization. You used one period in the entire first block of text... You needed about five periods total to not make it look like someone is suffering an unstoppable bout of mouth diarrhea.
You also made no attempt to list the server's staff, rules, or current plugins. Is it bukkit or vanilla? You did not list the website information, if any. We essentially know nothing about this server other than that "its a cool server" and that it is PvP and is primarily survival.
You did not include screenshots of the server, an essential part of a server review. You did not tell us of any personal experiences on this server, the mood of the chat, or the atmosphere of the total server.
I find this review to be very lacking in information, grammar, and thought. Hopefully this helps you write better articles in the future.