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Rate my music/lyrics!(Will get updated as I produce more)
Starlight Glimmer
dog2sammy
Heya! Recently(very) I've gotten into making music/songs and writing lyrics, so I wanted to get her opinions on my content!
First song w/o music(i did not write the song, the site does not seem to have that option. Also, I misclicked, so the mood is incorrect lol. I can't edit apparently):
http://eng.musicshake.com/song/288650
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First Lyrics : (technically second ones, but these were better so)
http://pastebin.com/haWWgn8W
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Please, state your opinions on these, and maybe leave a 1/10 rating? Thanks to all who listen to/read this content I have created!
~Axew
First song w/o music(i did not write the song, the site does not seem to have that option. Also, I misclicked, so the mood is incorrect lol. I can't edit apparently):
http://eng.musicshake.com/song/288650
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First Lyrics : (technically second ones, but these were better so)
http://pastebin.com/haWWgn8W
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Please, state your opinions on these, and maybe leave a 1/10 rating? Thanks to all who listen to/read this content I have created!
~Axew
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Keep Working! learn about instruments and hear their sounds!
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I liked the song but I'd like to hear it without the person singing in the background. I do think the lyrics could work on some improvement though.
