- Well, first of all, this looks pretty good. The design is very futuristic and I like how sections are neatly broken into different areas.
- Something you could possibly improve on perhaps could be adding some color? Maybe it's just the texture pack or the picture, but it honestly looks rather dull. Maybe brightening some aspects of it could improve the overall build.
I'm speaking as a rather infrequent builder though, so take the criticism with a grain of salt. This build is very interesting, and shows potential.