Love the story line... why don't you do a chapter sharing job with another writer. get a basic plot synopsis and find another character to share the "protagonist status" more effective if its a girl.
Finish one chapter, send that chapter to the second writer, get her/him to write another chapter about what happens after that but from their perspective. that way you have a mixed viewpoint, then get them to send it back, then repeat.
The enemy is called 'the glitch'
She was created by a hacker to destroy all games as it was 'destroying humanity'
you and joan AKA. JoanOfDarkGaming( the female protagonist) are hired by the FBI or the CIA to enter the game, complete it and defeat the glitch once and for all...
