Alone (Contest Skin) Minecraft Skin

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This Skin is an entry in the completed Apocalypse Skin Contest.

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Alone (Contest Skin)

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MasaoMoon's Avatar MasaoMoon
Level 59 : Grandmaster Procrastinator
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It happened so fast, no one saw it coming. I think if someone did, they wouldn't have been able to stop it.

One day we were all living our normal lives. The air was calm, my kid was watching TV, and my wife was fixing up dinner. For some reason this dinner was amazing, it was the usual though. String pasta, breaded chicken, mashed potatoes, and my usual coffee to help me at work. I worked late nights in an office at a work I didn't much care for. But the pay was good and I got to spend time with my family in the mornings and afternoons.

As I was finishing up my paperwork that I decided to make for my boss to help him with a meeting tomorrow, the lights had flickered for a brief second. I had thought to myself that maybe a storm had rolled in. If I had only knew. The office fell silent. Then suddenly a sound shattering scream stabbed a knife in my chest. Fallowed shortly by another scream. They got closer and closer as I shuddered and hid under the desk. Something had passed by my cubicle it was extremely black and seemed to leave a black smoke in it's path.

The screams didn't stop for hours, I didn't think it was going to end. I think dawn had broke when they finally stopped. I slowly removed myself from under the desk in caution, battling my mixed emotions of what had happened. I started to walk around but couldn't see anyone. The only things left was their destroyed office spaces. Once I gathered up the courage I ran outside to my car. One thing was racing through my mind, over and over, "Is my family okay...". I turned the key and raced through the barren streets, trying to get home as fast as possible. I saw a few people just as scared as I was standing on the streets. At least I'm not completely alone and it filled me with hope. "My family must have survived, I just know it. They are probably sitting at home worried as much about me as I am of them." I arrive home and rush through the door. My heart sank as I saw the house resembled the same destruction the office suffered. I yelled out my families name but no answer. I ran through every room and ended up last in my boy's room. They were gone. My boy's blanket, which he had used since he was a toddler, looked like it was wrapped around a ghost of my little boy. I fell apart holding the blanket, wishing it was all a dream.

When I was able to pull myself together I wrapped the blanket around me like a scarf and took any supplies I could find. I left the house thinking maybe my family was still alive. If anything, find out what exactly happened.

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CreditTo the Apocalypse Contest for giving me the idea.
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Update #1 : by MasaoMoon 05/09/2012 1:56:23 amMay 9th, 2012

Made the character more battle hardened(As a apocalypse would do that to you.)
1:More muscle definition.
2:A beard.
3:Lowered eyebrows.
4:Removed tears.
5:Edited clothes slightly.

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05/09/2012 5:42 am
Level 70 : Legendary Dinosaur
DinowCookie
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Dimond for the story :)
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05/09/2012 10:25 pm
Level 59 : Grandmaster Procrastinator
MasaoMoon
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Wow I didn't realize who you were until after I commented. Your skin is kicking my a$$ lol. Strange that the creatures in each of our storys are similar. Any particular monster you had in mind when you made your story?
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05/09/2012 11:16 pm
Level 70 : Legendary Dinosaur
DinowCookie
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Well the image I formed in my head was some creature looking like the alien from alien vs preditor, a movie I have seen ages afo ;o and then the glowing eye thing comes from the endermen but I made em blue, otherwise it would be too much like an enderman ;o
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05/09/2012 11:33 pm
Level 59 : Grandmaster Procrastinator
MasaoMoon
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Mine was based off of a Enderman/Specter feel. The "Event" happening at night. The creatures coming out of nowhere and totally just destroying the people lol. I didn't want to describe anything to much. Leave it to the imagination. Which is why I only said it was extremely black and left a black smoke trail. I left the story at a cliff hanger because if people liked it alot I might have continued it.
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05/09/2012 11:38 pm
Level 70 : Legendary Dinosaur
DinowCookie
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I like it alot ;3

~Maybe I can link to this one I make my next part for the diary
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05/09/2012 11:50 pm
Level 59 : Grandmaster Procrastinator
MasaoMoon
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This will be a reply to both of your comments. First, linking my skin would be awesome. I would do it to your skin as well but I don't know if it would help much more. Second, I actually don't know much about writing, I'm more of a artistic kind of guy. But people and characters can change drastically because of a major "Event". So even if Amy was kind of a enthusiastic teenage girl, she can still be what she is during the apocalypse. I suggest do a servey with those who like your skin to see if they want to see a pre-apocalypse Amy.
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05/09/2012 10:17 pm
Level 59 : Grandmaster Procrastinator
MasaoMoon
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Thank you, it might not seem it but that story sprouted from the idea of his blue scarf :)! I absolutly love this skin. I know it won't win but I'm extremely content with how it, along with the story, turned out.
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05/09/2012 11:24 pm
Level 70 : Legendary Dinosaur
DinowCookie
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I thinks its awesome how you added a very emotional aspect to the story but still have the caracter be a tough guy, I in the first place wanted to make a pre-apocolyypse skin of amy with a part of her diary where she describes how awesome her life is/was and how she loves/loved hwr family and boyfriend to make everything more emotional but it kinda failed and made her seem like some overenthousiastic teenage girl ;o

I might try again later though, maybe I can find a way to fix it ;p

P.S. this is a long comment ;o
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