Published Jun 12th, 2012, 6/12/12 1:51 pm
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A captain on seas,
Taken by mist and breeze,
His eyes spot shore,
A hunt nevermore.
And the journey continued,
Even though captain had drowned,
But his mates didn't care,
No remorse or Sad frowns.
They took they're leave,
and left ol' Patch,
Not knowing of his secrets,
His devils Pact.
He awoke underwater,
Hearing a dreadful crack,
His spine re-aligned,
And skin flourished on his back.
He would become human soon,
But an immortal no less,
Enslaving his crew,
And to hell with the rest.
This is my skin for the under the sea contest, I hope you like it!
Honesty - I couldn't think of any groundbreaking or super original skin ideas, so i wrote a back story.
It's the first poem i have ever written, so tell me if i made any mistakes. :P
Lets hope for better than like 35th place this time, although i was very satisfied with that for my first contest. :D (sorry, i may be a good sport, but i still like to win. lol.)
Oh! Also i never could get the shading right, but i like it now, sorta looks like a Danori skin. And i freakin love Danori's skins.
Taken by mist and breeze,
His eyes spot shore,
A hunt nevermore.
And the journey continued,
Even though captain had drowned,
But his mates didn't care,
No remorse or Sad frowns.
They took they're leave,
and left ol' Patch,
Not knowing of his secrets,
His devils Pact.
He awoke underwater,
Hearing a dreadful crack,
His spine re-aligned,
And skin flourished on his back.
He would become human soon,
But an immortal no less,
Enslaving his crew,
And to hell with the rest.
This is my skin for the under the sea contest, I hope you like it!
Honesty - I couldn't think of any groundbreaking or super original skin ideas, so i wrote a back story.
It's the first poem i have ever written, so tell me if i made any mistakes. :P
Lets hope for better than like 35th place this time, although i was very satisfied with that for my first contest. :D (sorry, i may be a good sport, but i still like to win. lol.)
Oh! Also i never could get the shading right, but i like it now, sorta looks like a Danori skin. And i freakin love Danori's skins.
Gender | Male |
Model | Steve |
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