hair shading's a little wack

but that was supposedly intentional so, idk

another thing, the shading on the arms and body is not very easy to notice, try using somewhat darker shades next to the lightest shade.

back hair is like a few pixels too short, but you did it properly so gj there



(to those viewing this comment that aren't nothoro, i'm his teacher so shOO)

like i offered to ali, and gave to kizu: you can ask me for a screenshare DM call lesson on discord

i'm willing to dedicate some time to that, if you need it.