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Carols and Corridors (Creepypasta)

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campingdragon123's Avatar campingdragon123
Level 12 : Journeyman Dragon
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"(glass breaks)"

   I wake up with a start. Looking to my left I see a broken mirror on the wall, I hardly notice it because my vision is still blurry.

   "Wait, since when did I put a mirror on my bedroom wa..." Then I realize something, this isn't my bedroom! "Where am I?" I get out of bed, and spot a chest next to me. I look inside incase there's anything significant to what happened.

   Inside I find a knife, a match, and an old lamp with some oil still left in it. Even though none of it seems useful in this situation, I grab the materials anyways.Then I look back at the mirror.

   I am horrified to see a black figure staring back at me through the glass, with bloody sockets instead of eyes. In less than a second the... Creature vanishes, and the mirror falls to the ground. I wait several seconds longer, and hear a deep, cold laugh.

   This was an indication to run.

   I look to my right and see a hallway. Quickly, I light the lantern and flee. Shortly after I made my way, that same voice starts to sing. I sounds like a very terrifying version of  "Santa Claus is Coming to Town"

   "You better not run, you better not hide, you better not scream I'm telling you why. I am coming...TO KILL YOU!!!"

   "Wait, what!?!" I think, Just before somthing stabs my leg. I scream in pain.

    "I see you when you flee, I know when your afraid..."

    I go pale as I'm limping, not only because of the wound but also cause I'm fearing for my own life.

   "...I know all that you dispise and fear so be good for your own sake!" I finally make it to the next room. I set my lamp on a shelf and look around, then I throw up all over the floor.

   In the middle of the room, a corpse is laying on the table. The guy is covered in needles, even in the eyes. I start hearing the carol again:

   "You better not run, you better not..."

    "Just SHUT UP" I yell out of insanity, as I take out my knife. For a moment it's silent, then the voice speaks.

    "I told you to be good, but did you listen?" I turn around to see him again, face to face. With all the torment and frustration, I gather enough courage to stab the thing. It kneels over, but then it rips out the knife, and stabs me. "(Sighs) Do you ever learn?"

   Slowly, everything fades away.
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Icey tree
12/16/2014 2:09 pm
Level 2 : Apprentice Architect
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hmm bit odd for my taste: wakes up after a bang (dont notice the eyes) amd then right away: hey I am in a different room?! owh lets rob dah whole place and start with a random chest? doesnt sound clear but its a good bloog after all
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campingdragon123
12/16/2014 4:40 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Dragon
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lol yeah I guess it was a bit random.

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