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-Corrupted: A ministory-

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Hello!

Today I have a small ministory for you all, just for fun xP This will be kind of a sort read, but hey. It's something to read :D
Let's get into it!

-Prolouge
"It's getting kinda foggy out, capt'n" said the First mate nervously. "I see that, and I don't like it." said the Captain. "We'll keep on our voyage though. We need to get these jewels on land before pirates come and steal them." "Capt'n! Ship off the port bow!" "Is it pirates??" "No sir, it's not anything I recongnize!" "Any signs of hostile intentions?" "No sir! But there's no telling if they have good intention!" A green flash then appears from the ship. "Capt'n, they're shooti-" 

... 

"It's been 5 MONTHS! The only evidence of them even being on the planet is this." The investigator holds up a faded photograph. (Mutters to himself: That and one more piece.) There, in the light of a flash of lighting, stands a single ship. Half beautiful, half hellbent. "So.. what happened? That all I hired you for."  "Yes, well, there's one more bit of evidence." "Yes? Tell me!" "This." The investigator holds up a broked plank. Half coated in rich white paint, the other chared black and brick-like.


-Chapter 1: The investigation
"From what I see here, whatever hit the ship hit it at an angle. And even worse, it got absorbed by something. I have no idea what though." said the Investigator. "Ok, how does that help us?" asked the Dockmaster. "It will help us soon. Anyway, was the ship carrying any cargo?" asked the Investigator. "Why sure, just some jewels and the Princess' tiara. Why?" replied the Dockmaster "I'm thinking it wasn't pirates. That's for sure." said the Investigator cooly. "So, who or what was it?" said the Dockmaster nervously. "We'll se tonight." said the Investigator. "What are you getting at..?" asked the Dockmaster. "We'll see this.. corrupted ship for ourselves.."






And there you have it. Told you it was short XD Hope you enjoy. bye. Hasta la vista. No? Oh... you want MOAR? Fine... here.

-Chapter 2: Sighting and Boarding
1:10 AM. That's what the digital clock read as the Investigator and the Dockmaster were waiting silently aboard the Nyres. "Any... yawn.. anything yet?" "No, nothing" 

...

3:05 "Nothing."

3:06 "What the heck?? I see it! I see it!" screamed the Dockmaster "Oh gosh... it's creepy!" There it was, the corrupted version of the Halberdd. And in was RIGHT IN FRONT OF THEM! "It's gonna ram us!" yelled the Dockmaster "No.. it a few meters away. Let's board while we have the chance!" said the Investigator. "Very well... O.o" said the Dockmaster meekly.

Ok... is that good enough for you? Groan... no? Fiiine. >:I

-Chapter 3: Solving the mystery
"This ship is creeeepy!" whispered the Dockmaster as loudly as he dared. "Yea.. I know." the Investigator replied. "Can.. we, ah, go?" asked the Dockmaster. "No." said the Investigator quite firmly.  "Bu-" started the Dockmaster. "NO. Now let's go. Now." said the Investigator. They then entered the Captain's cabin. "Ahha! A trapdoor!" said the Investigator triumphantly.  "Oooh! Open it!" said the Dockmaster excitedly. The trapdoor creaked open with much effort from the Investigator. "Ohh. It's the treasure hold." said the Dockmaster.  "Wait... throw all the gems out." replied the Investigator. "Wha- why??" said the quite greedy Dockmaster. "Because they were cursed from this treasure. It cursed them forever and them some." the Investigator said truthfuly. "Oh. Then what was that green flash?" asked the Dockmaster. "What green flash..?" replied the Investigator suspiciously. "Ohhh. You weren't there on that night..." said the Dockmaster...

There. Done. >:P

-Afterstory
"So that green flash was really a fireworks blast. Intresting.." said the true Dockmaster. "Yes. Now I've got to get back to my place. Goodnight." said the Investigator, who was very tired. "Goodnight Investigator." said the Dockmaster."Hold on. What happened to the fake Dockmaster?" "They were going to drown but the curse saved them. Once I threw all the gems in the water, their souls were released." replied the Investigator. "I see. Well, g'night."
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Update #1 : by Orbiter 06/25/2015 11:20:20 amJun 25th, 2015

-Fixed a whole lot of dialouge, thanks to Zatharel for pointing this out!

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08/07/2015 7:00 am
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Awesome story!  Read it before but never commented. ;3
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08/07/2015 10:44 am
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Thanks Sparki ;3
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06/25/2015 7:54 am
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Zatharel
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the formatting...I fail to understand how a million different direct speech sentences can be in the same paragraph...
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06/25/2015 11:20 am
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Ok, fixed! Thanks so much! :D
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06/25/2015 10:41 am
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I know it... I'm a messy writer ;p
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06/24/2015 6:42 am
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RenegadeRad
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You have talent there, boy.. I might want to work more at this.. maybe add hero brine >:D

actually dont :P cuz im making something like that xD
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06/24/2015 10:31 am
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Thank you! Wait.. you are going to write.. a story? :)
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06/25/2015 5:46 am
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RenegadeRad
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Horror story >:D
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06/23/2015 2:51 pm
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LOL!  It's like an abridged version of 'Ghost Ship'.  xD
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06/23/2015 2:52 pm
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I've heard of it, but never seen it. Sounds creepy O.o
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