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ಉϻιԁಉ Scary Stories ಌThe Crow Manಌ

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*NOTE* This story is FAKE, meaning I made it up. Nothing in this story really happened. Thanks.
On a crisp day in Autumn, a little girl named Caroline was turning 8. She was having a sleepover with her two friends Lilly and Jane. Caroline was very excited to have her friends over so she stayed up all night the day before setting up sleeping bags in the basement, setting out snacks on the snack table, and putting streamers EVERYWHERE! The morning of Caroline's party, her parents made sure everything was set up, then went to pick up Jane and Lilly. After her friends had arrived, Caroline led them to the living room to watch a movie. Caroline's mother brought in popcorn and lemonade, and the girls settled down to watch the movie. It was a good movie, but, being little girls, they lost interest quickly and ran down to the basement to tell scary stories. Jane and Caroline loved scary stories, but not Lilly. She was afraid of the tales that were told, and at about 10:00 she asked if they could just go to sleep. Caroline and Jane were not tired at all so they pretended to sleep untill Lilly was asleep, then clicked on their flashlights and began to tell stories again. After Caroline told a story about a clown that lived in an abandoned asylum, Jane started telling a story she had heard someone talking about at school. It was about a half-man, half-crow beast that killed and ate children after their parents were asleep. Little did the girls know, the story was true. The story was so detailed and sickening, that Caroline got really scared and told Jane that they should just go to sleep. By now it was 12:30 and the girls were getting pretty tired, so Jane said ok and they clicked off their flashlights and closed their eyes. At about 12:58, they all heard a whooshing sound. The sound woke them up and they all clicked on their flashlights, terrified of what might be lurking in the dark. They shined their flashlights all around the room and saw nothing. They decided it had been the wind blowing the curtains, and clicked off their lights. 10 minutes later, they were awoken by a caw, something, say, a crow, might make. They quickly switched on their lights but saw nothing, except Jane thought she saw a black feather blow by. She distinguished it as a shadow and didn't tell the other girls. They went back to sleep. 5 minutes later, Caroline heard a scratching coming from the corner of the room. She woke Jane and Lilly and they clicked on their lights. Jane was the first to shine her light at the corner where Caroline had told them the noise was coming from. In the beam of her flashlight was the horrifying sight of a mangled half-man, half-crow with a dark cloak and needle-like hair with wings and beady black crow eyes. The bodies were never found.
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spongedog10
08/20/2014 7:10 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Pokemon
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First of all

Where do these girls here these storys? Im 11 and they would scare ME

2nd of all

THIS IS MORBID Where did you come up with this?

"Hey! Lets make a story about a happy little girl on her birthday! Shes SO happy shes 8! She invites here 7-8 Friends! Lets say a crow man EATS them!" I wouldent mind as much if they where teenagers but im sorry this is just WAY too morbid. The girls didnt even do anything wrong to watch each other being SLOWLY eaten by a crow man

I mean i love your storys but this ones WAY too disturbing

Anyways

Best regards 

-Sponge
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TokiDokiTenshi
08/20/2014 7:28 pm
Level 57 : Grandmaster Sweetheart
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Yeah, I get what your saying. I wrote this in 4th grade, believe it or not... Ya.... But I know it's creepy, I wanted it to be....
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spongedog10
08/20/2014 7:30 pm
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..... Not creepy, Morbid

And i cant imagine how you wrote this in 4th grade And then slept Without night mares

Anyways i like all your other storys. 

Best regards

-Sponge
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TokiDokiTenshi
08/20/2014 7:33 pm
Level 57 : Grandmaster Sweetheart
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I don't get nightmares from scary stories.... Idk why. It's not morbid it's just a story... I've heard WAY worse and way scarier stories...
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spongedog10
08/20/2014 7:35 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Pokemon
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Its


NOT

Scary


Morbid


Please dont argue with me i never stop.
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TokiDokiTenshi
08/20/2014 7:38 pm
Level 57 : Grandmaster Sweetheart
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I duns understand that but I never stop either. I BUG PEOPLE TILL THE END OF TIME! *Epic Swag Face!
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TokiDokiTenshi
08/20/2014 7:36 pm
Level 57 : Grandmaster Sweetheart
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It's not morbid either. It's just a story. I don't know how you see it, but to me it's just fiction, ya know?
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ValleyDew
07/17/2014 3:02 pm
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Where do you get those pictures?
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TokiDokiTenshi
07/17/2014 6:16 pm
Level 57 : Grandmaster Sweetheart
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I get them on google images, I look up a specified key word and I pick a pic that works.
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ValleyDew
07/18/2014 11:53 am
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Oh
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TokiDokiTenshi
07/18/2014 3:16 pm
Level 57 : Grandmaster Sweetheart
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Yeah
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