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Burning Rain [Short Story]

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zachstar1998's Avatar zachstar1998
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"Get Down!" I yell as the fireball flies over my head.

It just doesn't stop. Fireball after fireball. Cry after cry. Death after death. I warned them. I warned them all but they didn't listen. Now they are facing the concequenses.

Out of the corner of my right eye I can see people burning to death. Their screams of agony send chills through my spine. I run through the remains of our town. I don't stop because if I do, it means certain death. The sun is angry. Very very angry. And now, it is taking it's anger out on our town. All it wanted was some time off. Time to rest, but the people wouldn't allow night. They wanted to stay up all day, to remain in the daylight.

I feel a raindrop on my left shoulder, this isn't any other raindrop. It burns and stings. I cringe, but I can't stop to check it out. I have to keep running. I have to run from this burning rain. I see something. Something coming towards me. I don't have enough time to react before the fireball hits me right in the head....

This is my first attempt at a really short story. If you like it then diamond and leave a comment saying what I should write about next.

Peace out,

zachstar1998
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04/04/2012 10:57 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Caveman
frozenone
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i beleive next you should right abought a war between a group of dark people in shadowy robes that use the night as a weapon and a group of bright golden people using the day as a shield and as inspiration for their weapons... interpret as you wish
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04/01/2012 7:45 pm
Level 21 : Expert Pokemon
Ocelot
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Lol, if youve read a book called Now, that book reminds me alot of this epic story
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04/01/2012 4:06 pm
Level 14 : Journeyman Pony
milbelle
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i LOVE that short story Zach it was realy good
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04/01/2012 11:32 am
Level 44 : Master Enderdragon
noblemile
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(O__O) whoa that was the best short story I read ever! Nice job Zach!
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04/01/2012 11:45 am
Level 41 : Master Turtle
zachstar1998
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Really? People say I am good at stories but It means alot coming from someone I don't know that well!
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03/31/2012 11:47 pm
Level 51 : Grandmaster Princess
OfficialGamemode
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Awesome work, its great!
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03/31/2012 11:53 pm
Level 41 : Master Turtle
zachstar1998
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Wow thanks! That means alot!
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03/31/2012 11:31 pm
Level 22 : Expert Explorer
Brink_
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Read my Haiku if you could Zach. Interesting story by the way.
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03/31/2012 11:36 pm
Level 41 : Master Turtle
zachstar1998
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Thanks for the feedback. I might write a longer one if people like this one.
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