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Hello, I am xCryox, a creative writer, architect, etc.
I would like to amaze the eyes of PMC with my small short books, If you read these, please comment with constructive help and things I should work on!
I create mostly action stories, most about the army but this one will be about survival. If you like my stories, Diamond+Sub so I can continue it!
Dazed
By: xCryox
Chapter One
As I wake up I appear in the middle of forest, dizzy, I cannot believe the sight I seeo ¦ The sunlight burning down on me, I am unable to move because I am burned to a crisp, I cannot even remember my name. All I remember was rumbling through the clouds going at light speed. I try to stand up but my legs are numb but they are not broken because I can stand, I check all my parts to see if Io m badly damaged. As I look around I see smoke in the distance I am suggesting that it is probably another person that was a survivor in the crash.
As I walk in pain over to the smoke down there, I find a axe I wonder how this got here but I continue walking, carrying the axe I collect some wood. I try to carve out a knife. It is successful but not very sharp, but good for cutting. Then with the stump I cut out, I try to find some vines to create a bag, that I can carry. It is not that good but it works. I find a cow, and I try to milk it for my thirst, my mouth is watering just for milk.
I get some and I try to make a mini-cup so I can drink out of it. Now I am better and I create a leash so I bring the cow with me. I am at least 100 meters away now from the smoke, but it is behind a hill so I cannot see it yet. I approach the hill very slowly and I cannot believe my eyes. The fire is coming from a fire but the person looks ok, I have a much better look. As it turns around I get hammer in the back of the head.
This is the end of Chapter One! Please Diamond and Sub for Chapter Two!
I would like to amaze the eyes of PMC with my small short books, If you read these, please comment with constructive help and things I should work on!
I create mostly action stories, most about the army but this one will be about survival. If you like my stories, Diamond+Sub so I can continue it!
Dazed
By: xCryox
Chapter One
As I wake up I appear in the middle of forest, dizzy, I cannot believe the sight I seeo ¦ The sunlight burning down on me, I am unable to move because I am burned to a crisp, I cannot even remember my name. All I remember was rumbling through the clouds going at light speed. I try to stand up but my legs are numb but they are not broken because I can stand, I check all my parts to see if Io m badly damaged. As I look around I see smoke in the distance I am suggesting that it is probably another person that was a survivor in the crash.
As I walk in pain over to the smoke down there, I find a axe I wonder how this got here but I continue walking, carrying the axe I collect some wood. I try to carve out a knife. It is successful but not very sharp, but good for cutting. Then with the stump I cut out, I try to find some vines to create a bag, that I can carry. It is not that good but it works. I find a cow, and I try to milk it for my thirst, my mouth is watering just for milk.
I get some and I try to make a mini-cup so I can drink out of it. Now I am better and I create a leash so I bring the cow with me. I am at least 100 meters away now from the smoke, but it is behind a hill so I cannot see it yet. I approach the hill very slowly and I cannot believe my eyes. The fire is coming from a fire but the person looks ok, I have a much better look. As it turns around I get hammer in the back of the head.
This is the end of Chapter One! Please Diamond and Sub for Chapter Two!
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