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Heavy footsteps crept into Steve’s ear. He turned around swiftly, in front of him stood a figure with rotting skin, yellow teeth, giant holes in his shirt revealed open wounds. Standing next to him was a huge spider with giant long legs.
Steve swung his pickaxe. The spider hissed and the figure fell backwards holding his hand towards his face. Steve tightened his grip around his pickaxe, then swung towards the figure again, and again.
The pickaxe smashed into the figures skull destroying his head. The figure fell backward, the pickaxe lodged in its head. Sputtering sounds came from the figure. The spider squealed and leaped into action pulling the pickaxe out.
Steve stuttered, “I-I’m so sorry” , realising that he had made a mistake.
The Spider turned to him, its eyes determined on its prey as it crept towards Steve. It's pincers slammed into Steve’s chest, blood spat out. Steve exhaled; his arms at his side…
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Extended story, new art. : by Schitzzyy 10/04/2015 10:27:18 amOct 4th, 2015
Late - LEGO Minecraft Cave Hanger Contest
Changes made to submission:
- New images, the pixel art has been updated with a new design and older art has been removed from the entry.
- The story has been extended so more detail could be added, in around three paragraph detail was added to flesh out the story.
Extra Notes:
So since the last update ive extended the work count where i could and fixed a few problems with it.
Till next time,
TheHappiestAccident
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And not to forget the story, amazing aswell.
I wish you the best of luck :)
Good job :)