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My story-Chapter 1-Contest!

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This story is based on my and a character that is the exact opposite of me. I hope you like it!

It was a cold, dark night. Most would be asleep right now, but I wasn't. I raced across the labyrinth trees and into the clearing. Most people would get lost, but I knew my way to the sacred shrine of Miona the Firefox. I was here not to pay respects, but to meet someone here...someone important. Thato s the only information I got in the letter. o Blaze the rabbit anthro...correct?o I twirled around to find a black rabbit anthro with her left ear bent, with water damage. She had tufts of hair on her head and chest, with blue, green, and white colors on them, and her eyes were red. The opposite...of me... o Blue eyes, red, orange, and yellow tufts, right ear bent and burnt at the tip, you are defiantly Blazing!o She said, excitedly.


o Who...are you? And how do you know me?o I asked, with astonishment. o Io m Tsuna!o She replied with glee. o Io m so glad I found my counterpart!o o Your...counterpart?o I was confused. She did look like the exact opposite of me, but she still didno t answer my second question. o Oh, yeah! I forgot. The elder of my village says Io m one of the Sacred Element Sisters or something. There are only two, me and you!o Then she danced around. Judging from the way she acts and her height (she was short, or at least shorter than me), she was younger by a couple of years.


o You still didno t answer my second question.o I spoke up at last. o Oh! Uh, which question was that again?o I was a little ticked, but since she was so young, I decided to be patient. I took a deep sigh and said, o How did you know me?o o Um...well, my Elder said it was a fire element rabbit, gave a description, cus he saw you I his dream, and gave directions to your tiny village.o she explained. o I...see. What village do you come from?o I asked, because I could see from the look in her eyes she was eager to answer questions... o Um...Aqua village.o Aqua village was a village full of streams; in fact, the roads in the village were streams, everyone transported by boats instead of walking. The structure was amazing.


o It was nice to meet you!o She said, and snapped me out of my trance-like state. o Nice to meet you too.o

ya, ya, i know, it was short. But, hey, i like it.

Oh, yeah! I Didn't come up with a name for it, so i'm making a contest to make ya'll come up with a name (Bwuahahaha).

First place:A sub from me, diamond on 5 of your things, if you have less than all, and this story will be the name you come up with.

Second place:A sub from me, Diamond on 3 of your things, if less then all.

Third place:A sub from me

Oh yeah! I made a pic for this :3 as you can clearly see

Please participate! Well, you dont have to, but...

Diamond if you liked it

Sub if you want more

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01/23/2013 7:30 am
Level 33 : Artisan Princess
_cliff
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I hope I'm not too late XD...

"The Different Sides"
Considering water is a different side of fire.
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02/04/2013 2:30 pm
Level 23 : Expert Pokemon
Blazing Bunnies
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Well, actually, your not...um...I guess I could start it up again X3
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02/04/2013 3:04 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Princess
_cliff
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:D
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12/09/2012 4:32 pm
Level 20 : Expert Skinner
Zetrix
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A name contest huh? What about... "The Twin Elementals" or "My Split Personality." Other than that I got nothin'.
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12/07/2012 11:27 pm
Level 14 : Journeyman Prince
kenworld1
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right now, all i can think of for a title is "Me and my Other Half". because i think a counterpart would have the qualities that the otherone lacks, therefore it's like their other half.
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12/07/2012 11:33 pm
Level 23 : Expert Pokemon
Blazing Bunnies
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i guess its sorta the other half...I like that name :3
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12/07/2012 11:51 pm
Level 14 : Journeyman Prince
kenworld1
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yay!
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12/07/2012 10:25 pm
Level 6 : Apprentice Spelunker
Skipso
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Good creativity! There may be a few spelling errors here and there, but I don't really care much for them. Overall, nice story, add more on! And for the title, how about... B.B.'s Adventure? I dunno, can't think of much lol
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12/07/2012 10:34 pm
Level 23 : Expert Pokemon
Blazing Bunnies
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thanks! oh yea, its not just me, y'know, theres Tsuna too. And theres more to come!
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12/07/2012 10:35 pm
Level 6 : Apprentice Spelunker
Skipso
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Sweet! Can't wait :)
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