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{Poem} I'm gone, and not comming back.

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Ele_meno's Avatar Ele_meno
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Falling from the sky; memories of pain


Today, tomorrow; ito ll rain, ito ll rain.


I sit and dream; of what it used to be


And when I close my eyes; this is what I see:





Beautiful white flakes; dancing in the sky


We all were together; happy and content


Somehow not seeing, behind those walls; the lie


Great cobble walls fell; evilo s spirits augment





And all that they remember now; not the good but the bad


They remember only pure white snow, stained with red blood


All the memories of joy, seemingly a dream in only my head


And to them, memories of stupid children trying to fight; now lying dead in the mud





Am I the only one who wants to go back?


Back to the days when we were all joyful


Now demolished, after dozens of new names, new homes and new people


We could never stay together, not with how we were.


The rightful leaders replaced with dictators, and the choice makers replaced with children.





The snow that falls reminds me of the good times.


The place that was my home, not what this is now.


I watch back as you pretend you enjoy this.


Io m gone and not coming back, as if it would last much longer.


Io m gone and not coming back, ito s what he wanted.


Io m gone and not coming back, not like you tried to stop me this time.


Io m going while the spirit of what used to be, is still burning as the small flame you made it.











"Our statue lies at spawn, remimding everyone of what real heroes do.


Our history is the story everyone whispers through the walls.


We are the highest up yet lowest down in that world.


We changed their history for sure.


RIP Triforce and it's many branches."



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Well, this is one of many about my old faction and is a true story. I was sick for months, found a good server, started a faction-- and it became big. Very big. The biggest on the server, the strongest, the nicest and best. We had good builders, we wanted peace, we helped our allies and we were just amazing. I could go on forever but here's the basics of the poem. [Check out 'Why I love the Minecraft community' for more about the faction]. Paragraph 1: No matter how far we ran from spawn it was all snow! The whole map seemed to be snow! We complained about how it looked bad on our base and always having to shovel it but when the snow fell it was beautiful! We literally stopped our jobs and watched it remembering how beautiful this game is. Paragraph 2: As I said, beautiful snow that we all watched. Behind our heavily seccured walls were our friends. We let them in our gates because we were friendly--they weren't. Paragraph 3: Now the real bad guys weren't the imposters, or the real enemies. It was hackers who got into the owners account. They is many conspiracies about it tht I do believe in but basicly it wasn't just griefed, it was world edited and changed very much. But whenever I mentioned it they only remembeed these fights, not the good times. Paragraph 4: e were constantly changing, new names, new bases, new people. I think we have gone through atleast 10 names, 6 bases and countless members. The rightful leaders; the two founders [me being one of them], and the Generals of our four squads that we organised our members into. One General ended up getting power, we thought he would be good. He is now the dictator--or was, there's still stuff going on that I don't hear much about being outside of the faction but I have my sources ;) Paragraph 5: It's falling apart, noone is claiming leadership of it. People are leaving. He [the dictator] wanted me gone, I was the first to question him and was kicked out many times before my friends demanded my return [ Love you guys
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Update #1 : by Ele_meno 03/07/2012 4:38:07 amMar 7th, 2012

Thanks for all the comments, they are really nice! :)


And of course 12 diamonds, not alot to some people but alot to me, thanks guys! <3

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07/29/2018 11:19 am
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CatGirl540
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nice! your poem is cute!
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07/22/2012 5:04 pm
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McCheeseBob
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I used to also have an awesome faction like yours. Sadly it too is gone because of a server update. Great poem
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07/23/2012 1:37 pm
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Ele_meno
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Thank-you and yea, I know of many times having to rebuild because of updates. :P
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06/01/2012 4:56 pm
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ILoveCookies
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Awwwwh snap c: . -Spart ;D
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06/02/2012 4:26 am
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Ele_meno
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Oh shh, you guys aren't supposed to read this >>;

;P
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03/03/2012 11:22 pm
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andrewnguyener
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Wow. That really touched me. It was beautiful. And I love the way you added the explanation on the bottom. Well done. Really great. (: -Andrew
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03/03/2012 11:24 pm
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Ele_meno
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Thank-you! I'm so happy that everyone says they are touched, and that was one of my goals listed on my 'about me' thing... Well I guess that was 'achieved' :)
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03/03/2012 11:27 pm
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andrewnguyener
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Well, that's great isn't it! :) -Andrew
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03/01/2012 5:59 pm
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Mothgirl
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This is amazing. Minecraft has never seemed so meaningful before. I just wish I could make a story or a poem as .......wow. I don't think I've been truly speechless before.
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03/02/2012 2:35 am
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Ele_meno
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I'm so happy now! I didn't know it was that good really, thank-you! :D <3
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