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The Sunken Treasure

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FireLily302's Avatar FireLily302
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A Day at the Beach is always fun. Until the shark comes, like in Jaws when that girl is swimming at night and she shouldn't because  everyone knows that sharks go close to the beach at night. That's why she died. Anyway...
Characters:
Page: A rich girl who is like a dumb blond (no offense blonds), but instead is  brunette.
Sabrina: A smart, serious girl who is really good at mechanics. Has a big family.
Ryan: A boy who has a crush on Page, really good at soccer.

Chapter 1
"Ermigerd!" Shouted Page. "I love the beach!
"Yeah!" said Ryan. "Me too!" 
Ryan thinks, ' Oh my god Page is so hot in that blue bikini!' as he walks into a tree and falls into the water.
"Guys come on there's like no one here yet!" Another girl walks out from behind the trees, with crazy hair. "People might come any minute now! We need a good spot."
"Oh come on Sabrina!" Ryan spits a sprout of water out from his mouth. "This is a private beach owned by Page's family!"
Sabrina glares at him, and he goes underwater again.
"Just do it." she says over her shoulder as they walk towards a calm sandy inlet.
Page set out her towel on the ground and sits down. "I bet the water is really cold," She says shivering. Ryan swims over, doggy-paddling. The sunlight gets a bit warmer, and Sabrina sets out her beach chair.
"Watch out guys, my little cousins are coming."
Page groans. "The ones who destroyed your leather pants?"
Ryan collapses on shore. " The ones who destroyed half of that mountain I like?
Sabrina nods. "They'll be here any minute.
" Let's give them a taste of their own medicine!" Page declares, standing up. "I won't stand to have it this way!", walking over to the picnic basket. "It's time those little brats had a-ahh!"
Ryan stands up. "Page? Page? Where are you?"
A voice echoes from underneath him.
"Down here, please!"
Sabrina walks over, her eyes wide open in amazement.
"Page, you found a Pirate Ship!"

a picture of the original crew.




I know it's not my best story, but im just kinda bored. I won't blame you if you don't like it, just don't send me weird things. Open to suggestions for the next chapter!
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Update #1 : by FireLily302 06/01/2014 5:33:27 pmJun 1st, 2014

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06/01/2014 5:58 pm
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I mean nice story
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06/01/2014 5:57 pm
Level 9 : Apprentice Explorer
redrover23
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Howe nice sorry could you make it more exciting next time but its good so I gve it a 7/10
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