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There for me - A Haiku

Published Feb 2nd, 2021, 2/2/21 1:02 pm

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frigid wintertime
a heartbeat to remind me
sweet dog beside me

Credit	My dog Athena
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02/02/2021 1:31 pm

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Odell Ottyeen

No offense, but the first line is one syllable too long for a haiku. It's a good haiku, though!

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02/02/2021 2:36 pm

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FieryFighter

Oops! Thanks for pointing it out. Thought "wintertime" was two. Fixed now.

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