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Opinions on a "Chibi."

MineGirlx's Avatar MineGirlx7/21/14 5:39 pm
7/22/2014 7:34 pm
MineGirlx's Avatar MineGirlx
Yeah yeah, this is pointless but I just want opinions on this chibi I made in like 20+ minutes. It's not based off of anyone or anything just inspired by music.

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MineGirlx
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07/22/2014 7:34 pm
Level 8 : Apprentice Miner
MineGirlx
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Thanks!
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07/22/2014 12:48 pm
Level 28 : Expert Ninja
_books
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Woahwoahwoah this is superb! And I have feedback, but it's everything people have said above. Keep up the good work, as this is fantastic for a first-time digital art chibi. :3
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07/22/2014 12:42 pm
Level 26 : Expert Artist
VertziForte
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I think the body has to be more smoother. But I guess this is a great start.
Shapes are your best friend here. Everything is made of a shape or a bundle of them.
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07/21/2014 6:37 pm
Level 8 : Apprentice Miner
MineGirlx
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Lol. I don't know what I was trying to do there lol.
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07/21/2014 6:32 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Button Pusher
aipoduhfoaifh
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The cheeks are TOO red, and a little too noticeable. It looks like she got jacked in the face twice XD
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07/21/2014 6:31 pm
Level 23 : Expert Artist
SnowyKaida
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Its a great start, but, the colors don't really go together, no offense, but the eyes kinda look weird, so with the blush. ^^;;
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07/21/2014 6:25 pm
Level 8 : Apprentice Miner
MineGirlx
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Thanks for your opinions guys! I appreciate it. I'll try harder next time.
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07/21/2014 6:24 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Prince
n8mo
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I really like it! However I have a few recommendations:

Make your lines thinner and softer, a very dark blue colour can also work very nicely for lines instead of black. The shading needs to be harder and more solid looking. The linework could be a little smoother, especially around the bottom of the head.
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07/21/2014 6:17 pm
Level 20 : Expert Zombie
Goku_LSSJ
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soften the edges and the colors are weird
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07/21/2014 6:13 pm
Level 20 : Expert Skinner
xXTheArcherXx
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Looks great! But something about the colors seem a bit off.
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07/21/2014 6:12 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Dragon
Malaionus
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She looks like she has a rash on her face
Make the body smaller
Add more white to the eyes
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07/21/2014 6:10 pm
Level 26 : Expert Nerd
Amsarian
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It's a good start, in chibi making. Better than my attempts anyway, but the colours in some parts clash and are not nice on the eyes. Also the shading isn't consistent, when shading you need a light source. It's pretty hard to get the hang of though...
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07/21/2014 6:06 pm
Level 27 : Expert Toast
zoossrocks
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Pretty good, but it doesn't really go together.
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