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Where Am I? Custom Terrain Survival Map! Feedback please!<3

ToxicFail's Avatar ToxicFail9/26/13 7:31 pm
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9/29/2013 9:10 am
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Hey guys! So, when i made my thread for feedback on my new skin, i got GREAT feedback! So i decided to make one fore my very first custom minecraft terrain map! At this point it has 3 diamonds, and has got me 2 subscribers! Thanks sooooo much to them! Now for the project!

Story!
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You were suppose to have the best time of your life, the best!
You were going deep sea fishing, with you parents, your best friend, and 20 other people.
"We were 20 minutes in, when the captiain called us."
He yelled
"Theres a storm, a big one coming! We need to get out of here QUICK!"
We all put our stuff away, when we started to move.
40 minutes later
"We still haven't gotten back, it took only 10 minutes to get here..."
This would be the last time you EVER would speak to those people, again.
When the storm hit, it was bad, and it only got worse.
Then we hit the eye of the storm.
All the sudden
BANG
I was out, and the last thing i remember was my parents, running towards me, then i blacked out
and felt a cold rush of water, no fear, no....happiness?
I woke up, my head hurt, had this been a dream!?
When i stood up, I thought i was dreaming.
I was on an island, but not any ordinary island.
This one..was different.
Its biomes changes, all the sudden, you were on snow, and on a mountain.
"Why is this place...so deformed!?
This question is for YOU to figure out.
As you turn you see something, something you should have never saw.
You begin to think
"What the hell, this cant be real...it just cant be!"
You start to realize, you may never see a human, again.
No shipwreck
No bodies
No nothing
Poof, and i was there.
I need to survive.......
The rest of the story is up to you guys to finish. This map is the vannila-ish map, i am making a new one
that has traps, more caves, and better terrain. Also this was my first WorldPainter map!
If you like it, diamond it!
Also comment to tell me what needs/should be done!
Subscribe if your awesome, and want to become part of my toxic army!
Thanks guys!
Feedback Would be great!



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So this was the first custom terrain ANYTHING i ever made! Hopefully you guys like it! Also i am making an adventure map version of this! Look out for that! If you guys(doubt you would) Want to use this map for anything, ask me first. Thanks guys!

-Toxic!

(Also any suggestions, comments, feedback!? Thanks guys!)
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CrankerMan
09/29/2013 9:10 am
Level 45 : Master Architect
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I'm glad i could help you.
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CrankerMan
09/29/2013 9:03 am
Level 45 : Master Architect
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Well...what to say It looks good for it's size but you could have made the mountains higher.
And you used standart jungle trees for the forest...
Maybe you could use some custom trees the next time.
It takes a more time but in the end it improves the project.
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ToxicFail
09/29/2013 9:06 am
Level 31 : Artisan Demolitionist
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Hey this is exactly the kind of info/feedback i need! This was my first one, so i know there is a lot to make better. Im going to look into making custom trees, and ill add them into the adventure map! Thanks! <3
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ToxicFail
09/29/2013 8:29 am
Level 31 : Artisan Demolitionist
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Bump, Can i get some feedback!? Thanks!
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ToxicFail
09/28/2013 8:46 am
Level 31 : Artisan Demolitionist
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bump
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Hearts Glow
09/27/2013 5:59 pm
Level 27 : Expert Pony
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Come on people let's get some views on here.
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ToxicFail
09/27/2013 6:07 pm
Level 31 : Artisan Demolitionist
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Haha! Imma say you like this!? Lol, i am going to take it as something good! XD 5/10 diamonds! Can i get there!? <3
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ToxicFail
09/27/2013 5:58 pm
Level 31 : Artisan Demolitionist
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Bump! Can i get some feedback!? Thanks guys! <3
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