do you want to do tekkit with me and my friends

krookyj

couljj

Ian The Oreo-snip-

Thanks for the feedback! This was my first video, so I wasn't exactly sure what to do. Watched one of your videos, to see how it compared, I'll definitely try to be more spontaneous

umm, why did you snip his text?

(Just askin')

Because it was long :b
It just takes up less space on the post.

i've been playing sence beta 1.3 HA i've been playing longer xD i like the video i'll sub

couljj

Ian The Oreo-snip-

Thanks for the feedback! This was my first video, so I wasn't exactly sure what to do. Watched one of your videos, to see how it compared, I'll definitely try to be more spontaneous

umm, why did you snip his text?

(Just askin')

I'd love to give you some feedback, but before I do that, you may check out a blog post on my profile. I won't post the link here directly as I don't want to 'advertise it'. That is not my purpose. You may find it useful though

I'll come back here later to see how your channel goes.

Please provide feedback.

Ian The Oreo-snip-

Thanks for the feedback! This was my first video, so I wasn't exactly sure what to do. Watched one of your videos, to see how it compared, I'll definitely try to be more spontaneous

"Hi I'm cj and I'm playing Minecraft"

Try not to open your video with an introduction we can already see, be a little more creative and spontaneous!

Straight forward commentary like yours (which isn't a bad thing) usually does not leave a lot to talk about if you're playing for 10 minutes straight, so think outside of the box, and talk about more than just what's happening in Minecraft. Think about a few things to keep your commentating continuous throughout the video.

Other wise, good video, keep it up!