oh its fine with me every bit of constructive criticism helps.

I will be the one, non-douchebag and help you out. You seem pretty good. I believe you need a better mic and intro. Maybe even go in another room if that would help. You also need better descriptions. "I hope you all enjoy this part of the let's play" is a terrible description. Also more humor could help. Everything else is good though. I apologize about the criticism but I am a critic of sorts.

hmmm anyone???

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