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Carpe Noctem: Seize the Night - Application Thread

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CARPE NOCTEM: SEIZE THE NIGHT

LINK TO THE IC THREAD - If you have been accepted, please follow to begin posting!


Welcome to Saxtonvale Maximum Security Prison, the harshest prison in the UK. For crimes you may or may not have committed, you find yourself confined within its walls for essentially what is a life sentence. Every inmate is kept in solitary for a vast majority of their stay, and have no real contact with their fellow prisoners. Beatings from the sadistic and brutal guards are all too often, the food is barely enough to live off, and you have no contact with the outside world. You know you cannot win, you know there is no escape. The depressing monotony of your imprisonment crushes your soul and reduces you to a hollow shell of a human.

The only escape from the endless torment is sleep. In your dreams, you are free. You can be whoever, do whatever - and there are no guards to beat you, no four walls to hold you in. Every time you wake, you begin counting the hours until the lights go out and you can withdraw into your mind once more.

But recently, something strange has been happening. Although you still dream every night, it has been a strange series of dreams that are always disturbingly vivid and real. And with every night, you realize that in your dreams you are not alone...

So, what is this roleplay about?

As an inmate of Saxtonvale, you are pretty much hopeless and defenseless to begin with. As a guard, you are allowed free movement through the prison but are never allowed out of the walls - you signed up for a tour of duty, and as a result live in the prison. However please bear in mind the the RP WILL revolve around the prisoners, so I'd like to see prisoner applications. Guards will be denied if I think there's too many.

Every in-RP day, you will play your character in the prison. As an inmate, most of your time will be spent in solitary but you will be allowed to, on occasion, visit some of the recreational areas of the prison - library, pool, gym, etc. However the prison is heavily guarded, so there's no chance of escape... yet. As a guard, you will perform many guardly duties - patrolling wards, escorting prisoners, talking to the Warden, beating up inmates, etc.

However, every so often I will call 'lights out', and the real fun begins. Every night when both the day guards and the prisoners fall asleep, they are all transported to the same dream world. Although they don't realize it, everyone they meet is a member of the prison - both staff and prisoners. This dream setting will be a different one every 'night'; for example, one dream could be set in a fantasy world with orcs and wizards and knights, and the next could be set in a shopping mall. Every dream you will become a different character to suit the setting, with a different job/gear/looks/dream name/etc. When I call 'Breakfast time', your dreams will abruptly end and you will return to roleplaying as prisoners and guards until the next 'lights out'.

TL;DR, It's basically two RP's in one, with a whooooole lotta crossover.

Rules

1) Same ol' rules as usual - no metagaming, godmoding, bunnying, OP characters, killing others without consent, etc.

2) There is no escape... yet. The idea of this RP is to try and make a plan to escape with your inmates, but to do that you first need to figure out who is who in your dreams. Take it easy on the plot development - we don't want you sussing everyone out on page 3 and breaking out by page 5, that would ruin the RP. And yes, there is a conspiracy but you'll all find out about that later. Mwahaha.

3) As per usual, romance is PG only. Not that you'd be able to hook up in the prison or anything, anyway.

4) Two sentences per post, please. And remember kids, use proper grammar. If you type like you've bashed your head on the keyboard, I will not hesitate to hit you repeatedly with a hardcover copy of the Oxford dictionary. And trust me, those things are heavy.

5) Weapons are fine, but only in the dream world. As things progress, you might be able to fashion some weapons to take on the guards with, but only time will tell.

6) The dream world and the real world are interlinked - if you break your arm in the dream, you break your arm in reality. Coincidentally, if you die in your dream you die in your cell.

Application Criteria

Prisoner:
  • Name:
    Age:
    Appearance (pictures are fine):
    Nationality:
    Former job:
    Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not:
    Backstory:
    Personality:
    Anything else?:


Guard:
  • Name:
    Age:
    Appearance (pictures are fine):
    Nationality:
    Backstory:
    Personality:
    Anything else?:


Hall of Fame/Shame (AKA Acceptors, Accepted and Banned)

Acceptors (also accepted):

gohKamikaze
CthuluTheOverlord
iHazRabiez
Elvengarda

Accepted:

thatbookwormgirl
smartgirl701
SilverDawn
Zadex
jackattack4000
Lord_Fowl
Xamboldore
ThunderFang
Korigon
cool_time22
Deth_Glitch
minecraftassassin

Pending acceptance (if your name is here, please follow the instructions that you have been given by an acceptor)

Gamergize

Banned:

Stay on my good side, play nice, and your name won't end up here.
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gohkamikaze
05/30/2013 9:06 am
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Minecraftassassin
gohkamikazeOn another note, why is there so many people in here for violent crimes? Come on gaiz, we need some drug dealers or money launderers and shizz. Mix it up a little!


My character was a dealer in narcotics and had violent crimes.


True, and a quick scan shows that Xevolution's character was in for grievous hacking offenses.
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Minecraftassassin
05/30/2013 8:32 am
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gohkamikazeOn another note, why is there so many people in here for violent crimes? Come on gaiz, we need some drug dealers or money launderers and shizz. Mix it up a little!


My character was a dealer in narcotics and had violent crimes.
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gohkamikaze
05/30/2013 6:02 am
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Greetings, friends! I've been a bit inactive what with exam period coming up and such, so I apologize for the delay.

DeathLaserName: Alex Miller
Age: 36
Appearance:
Nationality: UK
Former job: Construction
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: He killed people with a crane over rage that his wife left him. *le cliche'*
Backstory: Alex was a simple man with a simple life. He was in a coffee shop one day when he got a text from his wife. It read as said-

Alex, I loved you with all my heart, but I've taken my things and am in my mothers house. I apologize.

Alex was outraged, he worked hard for money and food on the table. And she just leaves him like that? He spilled his coffee on a woman in the shop and went home. The next day.
Alex was moving large boulders, so he got in the crane. He started thinking about his wife, his hand moved in anger and he crushed someone with the boulder. He thrusted his hand again and he knocked somebody across the town. The cops were on patrol and saw him, they ran up and tazed him. Then it was all hazy.
When he awoke he was in Saxtonvale prison, "Where am I?" he asked. The cops said "Saxtonvale High Security Prison, you have been charged with murder."
Personality: Angry, an easy going guy. High hopes of getting out.
Anything else?: I've been putting this off for a while..


Heh, high hopes for getting out. Shame Saxtonvale isn't a place for prisoners on remand >:D Accepted.

XoXoAwesomeName: Marissa Longo
Age: 25
Appearance (pictures are fine):
Nationality: Canadian
Former job: She had no job.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Dangerous fist fight.
Backstory: Marissa wasn't the girl to mess with. Although she is patient, she has no problem with ripping you to shreds. That's how she got into jail. She was at a club with her friends and a few boys started up on them. They called them stupid and other words I shall not post. That's when Marissa had enough. She got up and smacked one boy across the face, nearly making him tumble. His two other friends started to attack. By then, bartenders were panicking and calling the cops. It was a battle of the sexes. The police came, arrested the troublemakers, and spread them far apart. Marissa, starting the dangerous battle had been shipped to this awful prison. She is like every other prisoner: She wakes up, eats, gets beaten, and goes back to her own world. She enjoys spending time in the library when she can before night so she can "Dream Better".
Personality: Quiet, athletic, brave, kind, patient.
Anything else?: Rawr hi.


Interesting backstory, interesting backstory indeed... I would have liked to see the repercussions of that fight explained a bit more (maybe someone died, or perhaps it ended in a full-blown riot?) but it will suffice. Accepted.



On another note, why is there so many people in here for violent crimes? Come on gaiz, we need some drug dealers or money launderers and shizz. Mix it up a little!
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_books
05/29/2013 7:22 pm
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XoXoAwesomeName: Marissa Longo
Age: 25
Appearance (pictures are fine):
Nationality: Canadian
Former job: She had no job.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Dangerous fist fight.
Backstory: Marissa wasn't the girl to mess with. Although she is patient, she has no problem with ripping you to shreds. That's how she got into jail. She was at a club with her friends and a few boys started up on them. They called them stupid and other words I shall not post. That's when Marissa had enough. She got up and smacked one boy across the face, nearly making him tumble. His two other friends started to attack. By then, bartenders were panicking and calling the cops. It was a battle of the sexes. The police came, arrested the troublemakers, and spread them far apart. Marissa, starting the dangerous battle had been shipped to this awful prison. She is like every other prisoner: She wakes up, eats, gets beaten, and goes back to her own world. She enjoys spending time in the library when she can before night so she can "Dream Better".
Personality: Quiet, athletic, brave, kind, patient.
Anything else?: Rawr hi.

Butts. Give me an answer.
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Cyndus
05/29/2013 5:56 pm
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*Sniffles*

Bump
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_books
05/28/2013 4:52 pm
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Name: Marissa Longo
Age: 25
Appearance (pictures are fine):
Nationality: Canadian
Former job: She had no job.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Dangerous fist fight. (Polica believe people were seriously hurt and someone harassed another with a broken bottle)
Backstory: Marissa wasn't the girl to mess with. Although she is patient, she has no problem with ripping you to shreds. That's how she got into jail. She was at a club with her friends and a few boys started up on them. They called them stupid and other words I shall not post. That's when Marissa had enough. She got up and smacked one boy across the face, nearly making him tumble. His two other friends started to attack. By then, bartenders were panicking and calling the cops. It was a battle of the sexes. The police came, arrested the troublemakers, and spread them far apart. Marissa, starting the dangerous battle had been shipped to this awful prison. She is like every other prisoner: She wakes up, eats, gets beaten, and goes back to her own world. She enjoys spending time in the library when she can before night so she can "Dream Better".
Personality: Quiet, athletic, brave, kind, patient.
Anything else?: Rawr hi.
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Cyndus
05/28/2013 4:01 pm
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Name: Alex Miller
Age: 36
Appearance:
Nationality: UK
Former job: Construction
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: He killed people with a crane over rage that his wife left him. *le cliche'*
Backstory: Alex was a simple man with a simple life. He was in a coffee shop one day when he got a text from his wife. It read as said-

Alex, I loved you with all my heart, but I've taken my things and am in my mothers house. I apologize.

Alex was outraged, he worked hard for money and food on the table. And she just leaves him like that? He spilled his coffee on a woman in the shop and went home. The next day.
Alex was moving large boulders, so he got in the crane. He started thinking about his wife, his hand moved in anger and he crushed someone with the boulder. He thrusted his hand again and he knocked somebody across the town. The cops were on patrol and saw him, they ran up and tazed him. Then it was all hazy.
When he awoke he was in Saxtonvale prison, "Where am I?" he asked. The cops said "Saxtonvale High Security Prison, you have been charged with murder."
Personality: Angry, an easy going guy. High hopes of getting out.
Anything else?: I've been putting this off for a while..
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Erythmarie
05/28/2013 11:28 am
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This sounds interesting. It reminds me of the Escape from Furnace (or in the UK, just Furnace) series, which is good. I will most likely be applying. Although it's likely I won't have an application in for a few days. I usually take at least two days on my apps, and I'm already writing something at the moment, and I'd rather not jump from one app to another without having the first one finished.
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Elvengarda
05/17/2013 5:18 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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Read ur backstory xevo, ur accepted!
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Conner65
05/15/2013 7:01 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Scribe
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Hai! Sorry the app took so long to get fixed, but I had to buy new parts for my tower and I was down for around a half month
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gohkamikaze
05/12/2013 7:18 pm
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ANNOUNCEMENT TIME! Elvengarda is now a member of the acceptor team! Welcome, and I hope you do this RP proud
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tmplumber
05/12/2013 11:24 am
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I think I might now. And then I may make some skins...
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Minecraftassassin
05/12/2013 10:34 am
Level 26 : Expert Blacksmith
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Guess I should bump this
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tmplumber
04/28/2013 8:49 am
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" Murder or manslaughter. Its all a flip of a card... "
Name: Lucas Jean
Age: 22
Appearance (pictures are fine):
Nationality: Irish
Former job: Barman
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Murder.
Backstory: Coming Soon
Personality: Funny, kind and slightly insane
Anything else?:
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Elvengarda
05/12/2013 11:23 am
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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The idea is really good, but you really should get that background done
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gohkamikaze
04/27/2013 6:39 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Crafter
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XevolutionName: Vine Youngblood
Age: 27
Appearance (pictures are fine):
Nationality: English
Former job: Aristocrat, large buisness owner
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Conspiracy, Government hacking(Falsely accused)
Backstory: Vine Youngblood grew up with no parents, leaving him in a ragged orphan home. He was arrested a few times for stealing. Vine had a tendency to run into trouble with the law, as he was slightly troubled as a child, and had many disturbances.

When Vine was convicted for hacking against the government and conspiring against them, his buinesness, Youngbloud industries(a technology development company) was sold off and Vine was thrown into jail after a three month long trial
Personality: Vine is a very stubborn person, though he is reasonable. He is short tempered but usually keeps to himself.
Anything else?: Nooope


Pretty good app, one thing I would like to see though is how he ended up with all that wealth and power with his company after being an orphan who kept having run-ins with the Law. Did he study? Did he inherit something from a distant relative? Did he win the lottery? Please provide some further detail and I'll re-review
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Conner65
04/25/2013 12:05 am
Level 15 : Journeyman Scribe
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Name: Vine Youngblood
Age: 27
Appearance (pictures are fine):
Nationality: English
Former job: Aristocrat, large buisness owner
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Conspiracy, Government hacking(Falsely accused)
Backstory:
Vine Youngblood grew up with no parents, leaving him in a ragged orphan home. He was arrested a few times for stealing. Vine had a tendency to run into trouble with the law, as he was slightly troubled as a child, and had many disturbances.
Vine, at the age of 20, learned of his uncle, Derran Yendell. His uncle owned a large Tech company, one of great fame; Yendell Tech. When Vine was 23, Yendell died, leaving his company in the depths. When the will of Yendel was read, Vine discovered his uncle left the company to him, as he was well accomplished in the areas of technology. Vine took place as owner and CEO of the company.
After taking over the company, Vine renamed the companie to Youngblood Enterprises, and branching the buisness out into other Economic areas, the company grew in status.
When Vine was convicted for hacking against the government and conspiring against them, his buinesness, Youngbloud Enterprises, was sold off and Vine was thrown into jail after a three month long trial
Personality: Vine is a very stubborn person, though he is reasonable. He is short tempered but usually keeps to himself.
Anything else?: Nooope
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Minecraftassassin
04/21/2013 10:15 pm
Level 26 : Expert Blacksmith
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Okay sent it to you. Let me know what you think.
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Minecraftassassin
04/21/2013 8:46 pm
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"You think you can break me? Do you know who I am? Where I'm from? You can't break me!"
Name: Aidan McGonagal
Age: 27
Appearance (pictures are fine): Seen above.
Nationality: Irish
Former job:I.R.A. Member
Convicted crime(s), not falsely accused: Theft, murder, arson, political assassination, and distribution of narcotics.

Backstory: Aidan was a I.R.A. member born directly into one of the biggest families in it. He was raised to hate the British and has cause several dozen crimes against Britain alone. His first of his crimes was small time narcotic sales, and ounce here a few grams there. He quickly moved up the chain to a leader of a cell block. He had political connections which could normally keep him out of jail. He helped a few times to burn town town halls and kill those inside as well.

He hated literally every british person he would come across. When he found one alone he would commonly jump them, not even taking their money. He would organize hunts for them trying to remove every last one from Ireland permanently. When a British person would come to him for his "product" he always kept a special poisoned stash just for them. He removed every last British person from the towns he controlled.

Eventually a British person had the balls to run for mayor of one of his towns. This man went missing withing three days. A few weeks later he was found hanging from a stoplight with signs of torture all over his body. He was able to get away with this with ease.

Eventually Aidan was finally found in Britain selling some of his poisoned stash to the locals. This was enough to bring him in for a life sentence due to just the amount of narcotics he had on him. When they got the warrants to search his house they found proof for the other crimes he committed. They found traces of the British, would be, mayor's blood. They found items used to create improvised explosives, multiple unregistered guns, and several items destined for a fence.

Aidan was sent to the prison after a mere thirty minutes at court. He was sent to the cell block that was meant for solitary. On the ride there the guard on the bus remarked, "Once you come here you ain't seeing the outside for a good long time you Irish scum," Aidan spat at him resulting in his first beating. He entered the prison multiple bruises and possibly a few fractures.

Personality: Strong headed, hateful of represser (People from Britain), sympathetic to children, merciful.
Anything else?: I have a little entrance for this guy planned out; I can PM you it if you want.
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gohkamikaze
04/21/2013 10:03 pm
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You had me at IRA Sure thing man, PM me and I'll tell you what I think/whether it fits with the grand scheme of things. Otherwise, awesome app, accepted

On an entirely unrelated note, I think it's about time I updated the list of accepted RP-ers...
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Deth_Glitch
04/09/2013 6:18 am
Level 35 : Artisan Turtle
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Agreed, they changed Dante and made him an emo shit who has no more witty remarks :/ And then Virgil its turned to crap too... ;(
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Deth_Glitch
04/08/2013 1:38 pm
Level 35 : Artisan Turtle
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Hmm?
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Elvengarda
04/08/2013 1:30 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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~(O.O)~
Fish is fascinated
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Deth_Glitch
04/08/2013 1:00 pm
Level 35 : Artisan Turtle
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Name: Damon Farrow
Age: 27
Appearance:

Nationality: English
Former job: Never had one.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Murder, Grand Theft Auto, Grand Theft, Assault, avoiding parole and Breaking out of Jail
Backstory: Damon grew up and lived fairly normally. Never met his father and his mother was too busy to show any real affection. In primary school he was picked on and bullied, treated like dirt. He learned to hate the world and everyone in it. It got messy when he got into secondary school. He managed to get in with the wrong crowd. In year 8 he was allways high and had been in jail so often he would get arrested if he wanted a bed for the night.
Then they decided to 'kick him out' as he saw it. The reason was that, being in year nine, he had stolen one of their consoles and had hid it. Then he got mad. He nearly killed one of them and he stole another console as well as all of their parents jewelry and he got in a fight with them, which he lost. He was now 15 and in year 10, he had been doing weights for some time and was getting pretty fit. He was by far the strongest person in the year and went for 'round 2' with the crowd that kicked him out. They were left bleeding and, in some cases, unconscious. This time the police came again and arrested him for grand theft because of the theft he did two years ago, as well as charging him for assault. He managed to get his sentence down to 10 years and was out at age 25, just a month before his 26th birthday. He met up with an old friend of his and the only person he cared about other than his mother. The only other person who had cared about him too, Ricky. Ricky had been in jail alot too. He had reformed and was now a great kind guy, family and all. Someone accused him of Grand Theft of £100k which he didn't have and after a tough legal case he lost. Damon was alone in the world, Ricky had his family. When the police came Damon fought them outside of Rickys house and ended up killing one, he stole the police car and tried to get away. This time they returned with batons and guns. Ricky was trying to stay out of Jail. At this point Damons sentence was 50 years and Rickys was about the same. Damon's last call was to his lawyer who he told to tell Ricky that he was going to take the fall for it all. Ricky got of scott free and Damon got a life sentance. Damon broke out only to be brought back to a new prison Saxtonvale.
Personality: He is gruff and mean but will do anything to protect those he cares about. Very distrustful but loyal to those who earned, those he cares about.
Anything else?: Nu uh? Other than DmC sucks and DMC:1-4 rules?
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gohkamikaze
04/08/2013 6:57 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Crafter
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I was wondering how DmC was; I haven't played the series in years, but when I saw the box art for the new one I was a bit sceptical... Anyway, accepted
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gohkamikaze
03/21/2013 2:46 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Crafter
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C'mon guys, get over to that IC. We're basically down to Elven, smartgirl and myself at the moment... q_q
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iHazRabiez
03/12/2013 2:00 am
Level 29 : Expert Crafter
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Lololololol Spring Break is just like an extended weekend.
Giving me more time to play Mass Effect.
Again.
And again.
And again.

I'm going to start another playthrough soon.
Yes...
If I manage to tear myself away from Mass Effect and its powerful indoctrination, I'll try to post here.

But yeah, Hugo's doing the night rounds, pretty sure I posted that. Totally not an excuse for me to ignore the roleplay as I play Mass Effect.
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gohkamikaze
03/12/2013 1:20 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Crafter
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Hugo never went to sleep, so he won't be in on the dream. At least, not this time around. Rabiez could still post as Hugo doing the night rounds... If he can tear himself away from all that web surf- erm, those 'sick raves' he's most likely enjoying.

Ahh... Spring break... You guys are lucky not having holidays in the hottest time of year. I'm almost jealous q_q
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SilverDawn
03/12/2013 12:02 am
Level 7 : Apprentice Explorer
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Rabiez is on Spring Break '13. He is partying his ass off. Alone. With his computer. We all know what's going on.
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Panda_Queen
03/11/2013 11:56 pm
Level 25 : Expert Nerd
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He's missing out on a good time.
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Elvengarda
03/11/2013 3:18 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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No idea
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Panda_Queen
03/11/2013 3:14 pm
Level 25 : Expert Nerd
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Does anyone know where the heck ihazrabiez is? It's like he vanished into thin air, I haven't seen him on the website for at least 5-8 days...
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Korigon
03/08/2013 8:34 am
Level 27 : Expert Network
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I actually think I'll wait the dream out till it finishes. Makes sense that way.
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Elvengarda
03/08/2013 8:29 am
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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Can I volunteer as an acceptor?
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gohkamikaze
03/08/2013 8:09 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Crafter
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Acceptors? Where my acceptors at? ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)

KoriName: Jonathan Stone.
Age: 24.
Appearance (pictures are fine): Curly brown hair, green eyes, a clean-shaven face, and a scar from the top of his lip to the bottom. I'm not going to describe the outfit he used to wear, due to it not being important, and he will just be wearing a prison jumpsuit.
Nationality: American.
Former job: Security firm.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Shooting and killing his drunkard father, correctly accused, and two unsolved murders, which he was falsely accused.
Backstory: Jonathan Stone was born to a Martha Lee Stone and George Stone. George was a drunkard who constantly beat his son and wife, and Martha to Jonathan was an angel in disguise. Stone went for two years to a school, but then the funds ran out, due to his father wasting huge amounts on beer. Jonathan helped as much as he could at home, but eventually started to avoid it entirely. He instead, was taken under the the wing of Alfonzo Panizi, an Italian Ex-boxer. Panizi trained him how to fight, how to defend himself. But he also taught him self-control. When he reached the age of twenty-one, he enlisted for the army. But before he deployed, he had something he needed to do. He went up to his fathers house, and when he stumbled out to go the bar, Stone shot him. It was an even, wellplaced shot, and George Stone instantly died. Then he deployed. He served bravely, but the law caught up to him. The aftermath of the trial declared Stone “Guilty of murder!” He was then dishonorably discharged from the army, and served in a jail. Though somehow, two murders that were unsolved were placed on Stones shoulders also. His fingerprints were on the murder-weapon, and a witnesne gun. And Stone had carefully hidden it. (( Threw it out the cell window, which s said he saw Stone. Of course, it was fake, Stone had been living with Panizi at the time, but he had no alibi so he was blamed for the two murders also! This was hard for Stone, and he gave way to his anger. When the guard came to give Stone food, and dragged him against the bars, grabbed his gun, and told the guard to unlock the door. (( It was not a high security prison, but he was moving to another high security the next day )) The guard did as he was told and opened the door. Stone then realized what he had done and tried to stop it, but his cellmate knocked the guard unconscious and unlocked some doors. This started a riot, but there was only one gun, and Stone had secretly thrown it out the cell window! The Police arrived and took care of the mob, but Stone was transferred to a higher security prison in the UK, also known as...Saxtonvale...
Personality: Calm at times, but can lose his temper. Likes to crack awful jokes and punchlines, won't break a promise.
Anything else? Ermh, Wrote this in about an hour. Not my best work.


Pretty good for just an hour's work, accepted. Although you'll have to begin RP-ing as a dream character. Check page 10 or 11 in the IC for details.

GamergizeName: Ethan Crucise
Age: 19
Appearance (pictures are fine): Dark black hair, Light blue eyes, Quite tall for his age. (I won't describe his clothes as he probably wears a prisoner suit.)
Nationality: British.
Former job: None.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Falsely accused of manslaughter after hearing a scream and examining a knife beside a dead body.
Backstory: Ethan was a generally pleasant guy. He would go through the odd mood swing and be really horrible to people but he always had a heart to help others. Although Ethan was nice, he was lazy. He didn't have a job and he lived with his parents at the time of going to prison. He took his parents for granted, knowing that they would buy all the groceries and all he'd have to do is a few chores to get something he wanted. Ethan loved hanging out with friends, playing sports and doing outside activities though. He enjoyed getting into mysteries and puzzles and was quite good at solving them. But one day Ethan was strolling along the sidewalk past an alleyway on his way back to his house, when he had a man's scream come from the alleyway. He ran back and saw a man lying in a pool of blood with a knife by his side. At first, Ethan thought the man had committed suicide but out of the corner of his eye, he saw a shadow disappear over the fence. Ethan picked up the knife and examined it until the police arrived and he was sent to prison for murder.


Personality: Most of the time he is pleasant but if he doesn't get his own way or somebody has annoyed him, he can be a horrible person. He has a very short temper.
Anything else?: This is my first role-play on this website!


Welcome to PMC Roleplays! You clearly know your way around the concept of RP-ing. However, my question to you is this: How did he end up in Saxtonvale, or the UK for that matter? Other than that, all clear. Please fix that up and head over to the IC; follow the same instructions that I gave Kori.

cool_time22
Name:Aaron Ichor
Age:16
Appearance (pictures are fine):Golden hair with black streaks, very pale. Also short and thin.
Nationality: French, but he lived in america
Former job:Game Developer
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: He was blamed for being an accomplice in an art hiest.
Backstory:Aaron was always quiet at school. His parents moved from France to America when he was young, and he has always had a slight French accent. He was always fascinated with art. He would come into the museum with a blank sketchpad and paint. He would leave with a full notebook and empty paint bottles. One of his friends from art class was very poor. They hung out a lot, and Aaron liked the company. Until the hiest. His friend put on a disguise and stole quite a few pieces, replacing them with Aaron's copies. He brought them to Aaron's house, telling him that he left them at his house. Aaron believed him, and his friend ratted him out. He was thrown into jail because of the art - and the fact that you have to snap a few necks to make a cake. Five less night guards, ten less paintings. These crimes were what got him here. Sometimes, he honestly believes he did it. He sees his former
friends face in the mirror, looking and smiling with a straight face as lies spewed out of his mouth.
Personality:Timid, bitter, but also clever. Constantly sarcastic.
Anything else?: He sometimes randomly breaks into French under times of stress.


A bit brief, but very well written. Of course, there's no explanation as to how he ended up in Saxtonvale or the UK. Supposing he was in France at the time and the gallery was in England, that would make the heist idea plausible. Please fix that up, and then head over to the IC - Same deal as Kori.
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Elvengarda
03/08/2013 2:39 am
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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Couldn't we just let cooltime enter in the dream? I mean, hugo hasn't made his entrance either and vlad just came bashing in a few hours ago...
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Panda_Queen
03/06/2013 9:14 pm
Level 25 : Expert Nerd
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Usually. But the dream has started. So flipping excited!!
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Cool_Time22
03/06/2013 12:51 am
Level 28 : Expert Scribe
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Actually that wouldn't work, insomnia is long - lasting, I think.
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Panda_Queen
03/05/2013 11:43 pm
Level 25 : Expert Nerd
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That could work. But not saying you have to, I have no authority over this RP lol
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Cool_Time22
03/05/2013 10:03 pm
Level 28 : Expert Scribe
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Hmmmmmm
Aaron could have insomnia. Then he would be awake during a dream.
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Panda_Queen
03/05/2013 9:37 pm
Level 25 : Expert Nerd
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I would suggest though people don't join in right in the middle of the dream, it might prove confusing since we don't know who everyone is right away in the dream as our characters. Just my opinion though, do whatever you want
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gohkamikaze
03/05/2013 5:49 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Crafter
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The... The app thread isn't dead? :') Guess I've got some reviewing to do when I get to a computer!
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Cool_Time22
03/04/2013 2:56 am
Level 28 : Expert Scribe
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Ok... I'll make it something different.
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anonpmc195880
03/04/2013 2:37 am
Level 16 : Journeyman Miner
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Cool_Time22
03/04/2013 12:40 am
Level 28 : Expert Scribe
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EDITED FOR THE LAST TIME (Hopefully):
Name:Aaron Ichor
Age:16
Appearance (pictures are fine):Golden hair with black streaks, very pale. Also short and thin.
Nationality: French, but he lived in america
Former job:Game Developer
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: He was blamed for being an accomplice in an art hiest.
Backstory:Aaron was always quiet at school. His parents moved from France to England when he was young, and he has always had a slight French accent. He was always fascinated with art. He would come into the museum with a blank sketchpad and paint. He would leave with a full notebook and empty paint bottles. One of his friends from art class was very poor. They hung out a lot, and Aaron liked the company. Until the hiest. His friend put on a disguise and stole quite a few pieces, replacing them with Aaron's copies. He brought them to Aaron's house, telling him that he left them at his house. Aaron believed him, and his friend ratted him out. He was thrown into jail because of the art - and the fact that you have to snap a few necks to make a cake. Five less night guards, ten less paintings. These crimes were what got him here. Sometimes, he honestly believes he did it. He sees his former
friends face in the mirror, looking and smiling with a straight face as lies spewed out of his mouth.
Personality:Timid, bitter, but also clever. Constantly sarcastic.
Anything else?: He sometimes randomly breaks into French under times of stress.
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Elvengarda
03/03/2013 4:41 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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Welcome
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Gamergize
03/03/2013 11:22 am
Level 1 : New Miner
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Name: Ethan Crucise
Age: 19
Appearance (pictures are fine): Dark black hair, Light blue eyes, Quite tall for his age. (I won't describe his clothes as he probably wears a prisoner suit.)
Nationality: British.
Former job: None.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Falsely accused of manslaughter after hearing a scream and examining a knife beside a dead body.
Backstory: Ethan was a generally pleasant guy. He would go through the odd mood swing and be really horrible to people but he always had a heart to help others. Although Ethan was nice, he was lazy. He didn't have a job and he lived with his parents at the time of going to prison. He took his parents for granted, knowing that they would buy all the groceries and all he'd have to do is a few chores to get something he wanted. Ethan loved hanging out with friends, playing sports and doing outside activities though. He enjoyed getting into mysteries and puzzles and was quite good at solving them. But one day Ethan was strolling along the sidewalk past an alleyway on his way back to his house, when he had a man's scream come from the alleyway. He ran back and saw a man lying in a pool of blood with a knife by his side. At first, Ethan thought the man had committed suicide but out of the corner of his eye, he saw a shadow disappear over the fence. Ethan picked up the knife and examined it until the police arrived and he was sent to prison for murder.


Personality: Most of the time he is pleasant but if he doesn't get his own way or somebody has annoyed him, he can be a horrible person. He has a very short temper.
Anything else?: This is my first role-play on this website!
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Korigon
03/02/2013 8:05 am
Level 27 : Expert Network
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Hahah, yeah, I really should have corrected some of that grammar before I posted it. <_<

On another note, I'll start fixing some stuff up, since I forgot to proofread this before I posted it.
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Elvengarda
03/02/2013 7:24 am
Level 33 : Artisan Architect
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KoriName: Jonathan Stone.
Age: 24.
Appearance (pictures are fine): Curly brown hair, green eyes, a clean-shaven face, and a scar from the top of his lip to the bottom. I'm not going to describe the outfit he used to wear, due to it not being important, and he will just be wearing a prison jumpsuit.
Nationality: American.
Former job: Security firm.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Shooting and killing his drunkard father, correctly accused, and two unsolved murders, which he was falsely accused.
Backstory: Jonathan Stone was born to a Martha Lee Stone and George Stone. George was a drunkard who constantly beat his son and wife, and Martha to Jonathan was an angel in disguise. Stone went for two years to a school, but then the funds ran out, due to his father wasting huge amounts on beer. Jonathan helped as much as he could at home, but eventually started to avoid it entirely. He instead, was taken under the the wing of Alfonzo Panizi, an Italian Ex-boxer. Panizi trained him how to fight, how to defend himself. But he also taught him self-control. When he reached the age of twenty-one, he enlisted for the army. But before he deployed, he had something he needed to do. He went up to his fathers house, and when he stumbled out to go the bar, Stone shot him. It was an even, wellplaced shot, and George Stone instantly died. Then he deployed. He served bravely, but the law caught up to him. The aftermath of the trial declared Stone “Guilty of murder!” He was then dishonorably discharged from the army, and served in a jail. Though somehow, two murders that were unsolved were placed on Stones shoulders also. His fingerprints were on the murder-weapon, and a witnesne gun. And Stone had carefully hidden it. (( Threw it out the cell window, which s said he saw Stone. Of course, it was fake, Stone had been living with Panizi at the time, but he had no alibi so he was blamed for the two murders also! This was hard for Stone, and he gave way to his anger. When the guard came to give Stone food, and dragged him against the bars, grabbed his gun, and told the guard to unlock the door. (( It was not a high security prison, but he was moving to another high security the next day )) The guard did as he was told and opened the door. Stone then realized what he had done and tried to stop it, but his cellmate knocked the guard unconscious and unlocked some doors. This started a riot, but there was only one gun, and Stone had secretly thrown it out the cell window! The Police arrived and took care of the mob, but Stone was transferred to a higher security prison in the UK, also known as...Saxtonvale...
Personality: Calm at times, but can lose his temper. Likes to crack awful jokes and punchlines, won't break a promise.
Anything else? Nope!

Since kamikaze isn't here *slaps kori with the oxford dictionary*
I'm not an acceptor but the story, I think, is good but crude, try to refine it a bit so it becomes great
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Korigon
03/02/2013 7:10 am
Level 27 : Expert Network
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Name: Jonathan Stone.
Age: 24.
Appearance (pictures are fine): Curly brown hair, green eyes, a clean-shaven face, and a scar from the top of his lip to the bottom. I'm not going to describe the outfit he used to wear, due to it not being important, and he will just be wearing a prison jumpsuit.
Nationality: American.
Former job: Security firm.
Convicted crime(s) & falsely accused or not: Shooting and killing his drunkard father, correctly accused, and two unsolved murders, which he was falsely accused.
Backstory: Jonathan Stone was born to a Martha Lee Stone and George Stone. George was a drunkard who constantly beat his son and wife, and Martha to Jonathan was an angel in disguise. Stone went for two years to a school, but then the funds ran out, due to his father wasting huge amounts on beer. Jonathan helped as much as he could at home, but eventually started to avoid it entirely. He instead, was taken under the the wing of Alfonzo Panizi, an Italian Ex-boxer. Panizi trained him how to fight, how to defend himself. But he also taught him self-control. When he reached the age of twenty-one, he enlisted for the army. But before he deployed, he had something he needed to do. He went up to his fathers house, and when he stumbled out to go the bar, Stone shot him. It was an even, wellplaced shot, and George Stone instantly died. Then he deployed. He served bravely, but the law caught up to him. The aftermath of the trial declared Stone “Guilty of murder!” He was then dishonorably discharged from the army, and served in a jail. Though somehow, two murders that were unsolved were placed on Stones shoulders also. His fingerprints were on the murder-weapon, and a witnesne gun. And Stone had carefully hidden it. (( Threw it out the cell window, which s said he saw Stone. Of course, it was fake, Stone had been living with Panizi at the time, but he had no alibi so he was blamed for the two murders also! This was hard for Stone, and he gave way to his anger. When the guard came to give Stone food, and dragged him against the bars, grabbed his gun, and told the guard to unlock the door. (( It was not a high security prison, but he was moving to another high security the next day )) The guard did as he was told and opened the door. Stone then realized what he had done and tried to stop it, but his cellmate knocked the guard unconscious and unlocked some doors. This started a riot, but there was only one gun, and Stone had secretly thrown it out the cell window! The Police arrived and took care of the mob, but Stone was transferred to a higher security prison in the UK, also known as...Saxtonvale...
Personality: Calm at times, but can lose his temper. Likes to crack awful jokes and punchlines, won't break a promise.
Anything else? Ermh, Wrote this in about an hour. Not my best work.
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