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Feedback On My Intro?

SkyBox_Network's Avatar SkyBox_Network4/23/14 5:23 pm
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4/25/2014 5:58 pm
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uaPKkfV ... e=youtu.be
Tell me what you think.
Feedback is what I need!

EDIT: I updated the intro, so tell me what you think!
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04/25/2014 5:45 pm
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TonyDurTiguh
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You got your feedback from one bump, don't expect another one.
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04/25/2014 5:58 pm
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SkyBox_Network
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I made a new intro…
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04/25/2014 5:38 pm
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SkyBox_Network
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Bump
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04/24/2014 9:57 am
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akwturptz
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Cool intro but make the tnt actually explode...
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04/24/2014 9:47 am
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Jiloacom
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It takes way too long to get to the point.
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04/24/2014 9:04 am
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ASF
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I think with intros, you should just get to the point. Take LevelCaps intro, for example. He has some fancy animations to catch your eye, then he tells you who he is after he's had your attention.
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04/24/2014 8:47 am
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Charmont
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It's a bit long, which intros can be, but it doesn't have enough happening. You should shorten it a bit or add more to it, but that's just my opinion.
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04/24/2014 8:40 am
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GenCedric
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Even though its partially a template, thats how i started with intro's, so, keep it up :3
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04/24/2014 8:24 am
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SillyPandas
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idk
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04/24/2014 8:16 am
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Amsarian
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Make it faster, if I had something that long at the start of a video I wouldn't get much people watching more than 8 seconds.

And don't change to something "fancy" (as in a serif typeface), stick to a sans font like what you have there.
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04/24/2014 7:55 am
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ElementalAndroid
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Nice intro, but I'd change the font used at the end with a more fancier one xD
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04/24/2014 7:23 am
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