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Perthy
08/09/2015 9:08 am
Level 1 : New Network
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A professional ethic, I like it
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Hebb
08/09/2015 9:27 am
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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Thanks man! I know it doesn't look the best but its my first real site I've ever made so its bound to be pretty basic.
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Azrath
08/09/2015 9:16 am
Level 25 : Expert Button Pusher
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Looks like every other website out there but just with other text.
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Hebb
08/09/2015 9:26 am
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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Well, that's a good thing I guess. At least it doesn't look odd
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CalPal_
08/09/2015 11:34 am
Level 38 : Artisan Cake
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Looks pretty.

Nice job.
Suppose it would be good for a guy advertising web design to have a decent looking website, eh?
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Hebb
08/09/2015 5:40 pm
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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I agree, thanks
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Pixel
08/09/2015 12:26 pm
Level 42 : Master Mage
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I love this but small improvements could be made.
Remove the blue outline when buttons are clicked (it's one CSS statement).
Use the right cursor for your buttons.
(This could just be me but the site seems like it could be a lot more colourful.)
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Hebb
08/11/2015 5:06 am
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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Thanks man, and yeah I did try to stick with a blue theme
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anonpmc1979224
08/09/2015 12:32 pm
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Nacay
08/09/2015 1:10 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
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Website is responsive, but it lacks personality. Maybe you should keep working on the design to make it more interesting. I would get rid of that black honeycomb background and replace it with something unique.
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Hebb
08/09/2015 5:39 pm
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Thanks man, I have been thinking about changing a few things. Designing is a skill I need to improve upon.
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Hebb
08/10/2015 3:29 am
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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Hmm, thanks. Noted.
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tobbestark
08/09/2015 1:59 pm
Level 44 : Master Architect
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The scroll is kinda laggy to me, but maybe that's intential
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durgadas
08/09/2015 5:02 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Miner
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Header is too large by a good bit.

Shrink down the overall size of that file (usually the culprit is the 300dpi setting, in my experience) and the site would load a LOT faster.

Even for large headers, I shoot for about 100k max in size. I downloaded the whole site using Sitesucker, and that one file is 5.1MB in size.

Your entire site is 5.8MB in size, as a perspective.

Welcome to the world of professional web design. It's an interesting profession.

Thanks,
Regis
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Hebb
08/09/2015 5:37 pm
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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Thanks man, very helpful. I will keep this in mind.
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bestmctop
08/10/2015 7:17 am
Level 3 : Apprentice Crafter
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Looks pretty nice! im working on two websites atm as well
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goto5048
08/10/2015 9:25 am
Level 34 : Artisan Musician
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it would be better but you used someone else's template
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Hebb
08/10/2015 10:06 am
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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It's not a template, 100% from scratch.
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Pixel
08/11/2015 10:32 am
Level 42 : Master Mage
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It may be but it does remind people of a Bootstrap theme.
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Hebb
08/11/2015 6:50 pm
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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Is that a bad thing though? If ive created a design which is up to bootstrap standards?
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Civeberg
08/10/2015 9:45 am
Level 29 : Expert Lumberjack
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I mean it looks good but you obviously followed some generic template. I've seen at least 5 other "This is my first site" posts with a pretty much identical site, but with different colours.
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Hebb
08/10/2015 10:05 am
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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I can assure you, I built this 100% from scratch. I designed the layout in Photoshop before proceeding to code. No template was used. I could even screenshot my .psd if you'd like proof.
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HydraCube
08/11/2015 8:08 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Pony
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I like how clean and simple it is, it's awesome. The one thing that doesn't look as good is the portfolio part and the colors, as it kind of looks unattractive to me. Besides that, it's awesome, certainly better than anything I can make!
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Gealx3
08/11/2015 7:08 pm
Level 74 : Legendary Artist
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I notice when I click "Send" at the very bottom without anything filled in, the red glowing outline around the boxes is a little bugged. Just a little thing to point out.
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Hebb
08/11/2015 8:17 pm
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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What browser are you using?
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ThelegandGamer
08/11/2015 7:41 pm
Level 1 : New Network
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it should be a website like this where u can download mods skins acc
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Hebb
08/12/2015 4:20 pm
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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It's a personal portfolio for me
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Hebb
08/12/2015 7:34 pm
Level 44 : Master Pixel Painter
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bump
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Eragon30
08/15/2015 8:13 am
Level 31 : Artisan Pixel Painter
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it looks nice. but in my opinion it looks a bit dull and flat. the grey and the blue does not fit well. try to make it more like when some one enters the sit they say WOW.

but i really like the fade that looks neat
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Hebb
08/15/2015 10:56 am
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anonpmc771545
08/15/2015 8:18 am
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thesprazzler
08/15/2015 11:00 am
Level 1 : New Miner
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Jesus just PLEASE get rid of smooth scroll. No one with half a brain flapping like a majestic bird likes that.

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Eragon30
08/15/2015 12:21 pm
Level 31 : Artisan Pixel Painter
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Much better! good job
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Epic_Gaming12
08/15/2015 12:51 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Unicorn
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nice
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